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This is a track by Matty B. Boy, a new talented artist here on macjams. He asked me to check out his page to add vocals to any song. I wanted to add to all of them! This is still a work in progress and I am waiting to hear back from Matty!!
Matt- I have messaged you a bunch! This song has not been mixed yet. I don't have your opinion on it. Let me know what you think and if you want to remix it. I disabled the d/l because I don't have your permission with this song yet.
To everyone else: hi!!! Do you think the speaking part fits in w/ the song? Also, if you see Matty B. Boy tell him I'm looking for him and direct him here. Thanks!!!!
Matt- I have messaged you a bunch! This song has not been mixed yet. I don't have your opinion on it. Let me know what you think and if you want to remix it. I disabled the d/l because I don't have your permission with this song yet.
To everyone else: hi!!! Do you think the speaking part fits in w/ the song? Also, if you see Matty B. Boy tell him I'm looking for him and direct him here. Thanks!!!!
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Lyrics
Breathe me in
Echoes riding up and down my spine
Telling a story at each vertebrae
Like a caterpillar that never learns to fly
Only your heart will keep me alive
God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change
Courage to change the things that I can
And Wisdom to know the difference (Serenity Prayer)
You close in and I don't know why
Feelings are hard to face when you don't look inside
So please just breathe me in
I'll protect you if you breathe me in
Just breathe me in and I will be there
Echoes riding up and down my spine
Telling a story at each vertebrae
Like a caterpillar that never learns to fly
Only your heart will keep me alive
God grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change
Courage to change the things that I can
And Wisdom to know the difference (Serenity Prayer)
You close in and I don't know why
Feelings are hard to face when you don't look inside
So please just breathe me in
I'll protect you if you breathe me in
Just breathe me in and I will be there
drakonis
I really liked Matty's original piece, and left him a comment, hinting
that vox would be good... and here they are! Very nice blending of
your lead vocals... I like your mirroring of Matty's slide in your singing
too. As far as athe middle speaking part, I think it works well, but you
may want to try a different way of speaking it, you sound like you are
reading it off a page. Usually that prayer means that the speaker is at
a crossroads, so you may want to read it with a bit of pleading or
anguish in your voice, add some emotion! That's my only critique,
otherwise this sounds really nice! Hopefully Matty finds time from his
busy dj schedule to check in here. Good work, Linda!
ttfn,
Drakonis