Very nice movement in this song, as well as very nice production. I like the way you used the loop, especially the crescendo and decay on it. If you wanted to make this longer, I wouldn't complain (Lisa)

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held together by guitar-loop-glue... as each loop went by, I smirked, saying "yup, I liked that one..." I enjoyed your opening loop too, except having the music start off panned to the right was a little strange. Overall as the loops swelled and subsided, it felt like a merry go round, which I guess is itself a loop, by some stretch of "circular logic". Nice entry, and welcome to Macjams!

ttfn,
Drakonis

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Finally this is approved! Enjoyed your entry, and a "Welcome to Macjams" from me as well.

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Thank you!

i like macjams because of their Members. And because of the music.

I had never the chance to submit music, because i had some kind of a writer's block.

I will buy a midi_keyboard soon and submit songs without loops. :-)

I must really confess, that i am a member of MJ since near one year :D

But i thank you for your comments and i will work on improving my skills.

Thank you all.

Ben

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welcome to MacJams!

clever use of loops. you picked out some good ones!

it seems like there's some distortion or clipping happening, especially at the beginning. maybe try lowering the volume a bit?

i like this. i hope you continue to put up your songs here!

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with loops :)

Being new to macs and loops in general I'm amazed at the different textures you can get.

Nice one.

Cheers

Dick

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The opening is really nice - that particular combination of loops. You could return to that at some point in the song, maybe a section in the middle to contrast with the dance beats. I like your choices for effects (delay, reverb, distortion) on the various sections.

The drums seem a little harsh when the first appear. I wonder if a fade-in might ease the transition.

I like the ebbing in and out of the various loops. Sometimes the sections felt a little short. You might want to give each of the sections enough time to breathe and really establish a groove before moving on. You have a nice flow to the piece in general and the variety of the loops provides interest without becoming unconnected. Nice job - I'm glad you confronted your writer's block and submitted this piece. Of course, now we expect to hear more from you!

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thank you all for the comments!

I am really happy, that you like my first song.

I will maybe submit some piano improvisations till december.

ill get a midikeyboard then.

so far you should expect nothings extraodinary from me.

Ben

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