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moving van by jonx [Email]

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Last Played: Jul 09, 2008 - 05:40:49 PM
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Uploaded: Oct 30, 2006 - 10:09:45 PM
Last Updated: Oct 30, 2006 - 10:09:45 PM



Description:
sketch for new song

Lyrics:

you can have this, i don't mind...
i'll give you the money back when i get mine
-all these paper bags and magazines:
leave them all out at the street
-there's a lot of things that i can't keep...

so, give it to me baby, one more time...
-i know how hard it is to find
a place or just to find a friend...
-i miss the time that we were in/love...

and she said:
"i know what you think of me...
and all my alcoholic family
-you thought that you were so above...
-but you're the one who's out of touch...

-because all you want is entertainment...
-will you spend your whole life in the basement?
-with all this music that you can't explain?
-for people you can't even name?
-i just think it's such a shame-that's all..."

now, you're happy when the songs are sad...
-you say it helps you not to feel so bad
about the person that you might have been...
-you regret the things you said to him...
-now, he'll never show his face again...

-waiting for the moving van...
you've got a coffee in your right hand...
you're talking on the phone to someone...
-you say you'll be over when this is all done..

you thought you were the only one...


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imagery &mdash 10/31/06 - 03:12:45 PM
jonx, wonderful. If you think keys would be helpful I'd love to collab.
I have to say though, this stands fine on its own.

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Well, if this isn't... &mdash 10/31/06 - 09:43:19 PM
...the MacJams National Anthem, it's at least an anthem for part of the songwriting experience...

I want to think that I'm not the only one fighting fan noise bleeding into my vocal and guitar microphones...

jonx, I sure wish you were a guy who replied to comments, but your songs are sure a conversation....

Ed

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great to hear.... &mdash 10/31/06 - 11:27:02 PM
a run through like it is just written. maybe there should be a category for that. emphasizes the songwriting over production.

Vic

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wonderful &mdash 11/13/06 - 05:57:57 PM
it's like i'm listening to you singing with your guitar in front of me!

i sometimes get scared by the thoughts that I reveal myself too much in my own songs. your lyrcis are always heartfelt and very private. do you feel that too? im just wondering.... but it's the those words in your songs that gives intimacy, i guess.

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Great Lyrics... &mdash 11/19/06 - 09:32:23 PM
Fantastic song. This is songwriting at it's finest.

Ed

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