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| sombrant said 1113 days ago (November 9th, 2006) | |
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Good Observation Good observation about the piano - the song actually wasn't supposed to have piano at all. But Jimmy added it as an after thought while he was mixing it. Check out my latest song called Back and Forth
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| smokey bacon jnr said 1113 days ago (November 9th, 2006) | |
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nice song nice song structure, great vocals and a good feel overall. The guitar however feels a bit too fuzzy for my liking - in fact the whole mix sounds fuzzy without any bass. Is this intentional? If not, maybe cutting back on the effects and upping the bottom end would give the sound a more rounded feel. Nice work. Check out my latest song called Hum
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| smokey bacon jnr said 1113 days ago (November 9th, 2006) | |
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apols again!!! Hi, i apologise for criticising your recording, it was my wireless headphones - they weren't tuned in properly. Now I've corrected that, the production sounds much better. Sorry about that! --- Smokey Bacon Jnr - useless like his father Check out my latest song called Hum
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| sombrant said 1113 days ago (November 9th, 2006) | |
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Hee hee Actually the mix is a bit fuzzy on purpose! Thanks for the comments! Check out my latest song called Back and Forth
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| FEEL said 1113 days ago (November 9th, 2006) | |
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Nice Composition Loved the groove. Nice bits and pieces here and there. The lead and backup vocals sit well in the mix eomotionally. Thanks for sharing. John Check out my latest song called Pigs Fly
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| rtcooper said 1112 days ago (November 10th, 2006) | |
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DAMN "Hello, Sweetheart. Give me ReWrite." GOOD BONES. But the small stuff distracts, some. I Vote ReMx to put it Over the Top. Vocals, Lead Gtr, Kit Really pull the Wagon, here. Great Tie Up on the Chorus - They're Marching. Rhy Gtr (esp if the same one as on Open Up lacks enough definition to be in the Center of the Sound Stage. Maybe double it with a stagger and pan it out so that it's bigger, but back so it can Push and not Block the Vx Trx at Center. Lead Gtr does not have the clarity problem, at all. I really like the pensive/plaintive piano, just wish it had a bigger part. I know this is an"old" track, to you, but it's too good not to have another shot at the Mx. I think it would Really Come at You. Best Regards, Cooper Check out my latest song called Intimate Anyway
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| sombrant said 1112 days ago (November 10th, 2006) | |
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Thanks! Thanks! We are actually retracking it. I am planning a heavier chorus so it really stands out. I was actually not planning on having any piano, but maybe I should rethink that! Thanks for your observations!! peace r Check out my latest song called Back and Forth
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| sewer rod said 1110 days ago (November 12th, 2006) | |
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Another one Great one, sounds good! Check out my latest song called No, Santa Won't Be Coming This Year
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rsolorio
Great chorus section. Liked what you did with the vocals. Fit well.
The piano seemed detached however. It seemed to be too dry compared with the rest. It also semed outside the drive of the song, a little noodling here and there, not driving the verse. I would shoot for more of a pattern that's defined and repeats. But that's my Kansas roots showing again.
Good tune