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well i have been reading a biography of the beatles on the bus for about 4 monthes now. it is a 13 minute ride. so twice a day i read 4 or 5 pages. i am at the point of them recording sargent peppers and brian being found dead while they are in india. i took a different bus home on a rainy night. i took the broad street bus. it had such an lsd element to it. and it was late and i was feeling so solitary. and this song appeared
Lyrics:
cause i could use a little help now
i could use what you know
i could really pay attention
cause ive seen how you've grown
oh just do me one favor
just one thing for me
lift me out of this hole now
bring me round where i can see
every time i look back and wonder why now
somebody tells me just to move along
i had the strangest ride home tonight
in a bus full of fog
the man next to me was singing
and we all hummed along
some people were praying
and the beatles were tripping in my head
i was wondering who would call you up
if they found me dead
rain soaks through my clothes
and it reaches my skin
oh it drips down my face
im 12 years old again
and all of the hurt and joy that we have found
still feels the same
in the rain, in the rain in the rain
every time i look back and wonder why now
somebody tells me just to move along
I'm floating through the house tonight
I'm not sure of what i see
the moon casts a shadow
on a picture of grandpa
and he looks just like me
something is brewing under my skin
it could be cancer or just the places i have been
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best song so far... &mdash 11/11/06 - 01:44:59 PM
This is a number one hit... My favorite song by you so far and I am a fan.
The vocals are amazing and the emotion comes through in your voice. Lyrically, this is poetry.
Great job! [ Reply to This ]
it is always &mdash 11/11/06 - 04:55:32 PM
comforting and exciteing when my work gets better and not worse. i think the beatle book and the dylan biography that i have been reading on the bus have giving me a more comfortable perspective and a more disiplined style. i always like it, listen, and blam for that matter, when you let me know what you think of my direction. both of you have been fans from the very begining and i am so greatfull to both of you.
thanks
tim [ Reply to This ]
Agreed &mdash 11/11/06 - 03:25:41 PM
we are what we read &mdash 11/11/06 - 06:41:30 PM
Unique. &mdash 11/13/06 - 05:36:52 AM
Good effort Tim...with some excellent turns of lyric. Like the vocals too....and background whispers.
Dennis. [ Reply to This ]
go TIM! &mdash 11/13/06 - 08:44:03 PM
my favorite points:
groove is awesome
love the fast lyric panned left and right
LOVE the whispering voices shuffling through
also there is a pitter patter rhythm that i am fond of
lyrics are awesome.
such a sweet song! --paxeden [ Reply to This ]
goose pimples on my skin &mdash 01/19/07 - 03:34:15 AM
wow the ending sounded beatles but the rest is just extra from you once again. scary powerful thinking words there and how many out in this world think this same thing if I was found dead `who would ring and call.......music words errrrrrry whispering behind and around just add to this another master piece from you thankq laine********* [ Reply to This ]
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The vocals are amazing and the emotion comes through in your voice. Lyrically, this is poetry.
Great job!
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