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You Are The One


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jeancharles

 Genre: Ballad

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"You Are The One" was a song I wrote in the early 90's and is my first attempt with GarageBand. The lyrics were written in 2004. Unfortunatelly I had a major HD failure and I lost my GB file, all that is left is this mp3.
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Lyrics
Hold my hands, close your eyes, listen to me.
You don't know half of how much you mean to me.
You are all that I need, all that I know...
I love you, you're my soul.

You are the one / The only one
Who knows my mind and my heart
Your lift me up / You bring me joy
nothing will break us apart

you bring me fun / you keep me going
you take me out of the blues
you are the one / the only one
I feel complete, baby, with you.
Song Stats
Hits: 1157
Comments: 5
Fans: 0
Plays: 225
Downloads: 47
Votes: 7
Uploaded: Jul 26, 2004 - 09:53:31 AM
Last Updated: Nov 26, 2005 - 04:54:29 PM Last Played: Nov 20, 2009 - 09:26:35 AM
Song License
Creative Commons License:
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Hardware:
Karaoke machine (as an amp) and its mic, M-Audio Keystation 49e, airplane shaped desk clock to hold mic in place.
Software:
GarageBand
Comments
said 1949 days ago (July 26th, 2004)
It's a song!
Jean-Charles: This song, even in its brevity, has a rather
nice feel, a wonderful lyrical quality. Bravo. I'd like to see
it fleshed out more, perhaps another verse. A little too
much tremelo in your voice at times. The violin passages
seem to end abruptly -- can you hang onto the final note
in each loop section a bit longer?
mcsweb said 1949 days ago (July 26th, 2004)
Vocals
are way hot. Try to tone back the volume on that track for
a better mix.
Check out my latest song called Pearls of Perfection
Cameron said 1949 days ago (July 26th, 2004)
nice song...
...but needs remixing, as already mentioned by mcsweb
w/bringing down the vocals.

Also, the texture had a bit too much "highs" and not
enough "lows" in the sound spectrum, to my ears at least.

The drum accompaniment got a bit repetitious and could
benefit greatly from some variety in the rhythm.

This will be a very good song when you remix, expand
and vary it!
Check out my latest song called EPONYM
jeancharles said 1949 days ago (July 26th, 2004)
Thank you guys!
Wow, I am so pleased with all the helpful feedback here.
Thank you so much. I am going thru a crazy week
(Saturday is my wedding day), but when I came back from
vacation I will have more time to dedicate to browse other
member's songs and give my input in return. As for my
song, I will take into consideration all of the input put in
here and whenever I can I will upload a new version.
Thanks, again.
Check out my latest song called Lady Ty, The Butterfly
stacey said 1387 days ago (February 8th, 2006)
WOW!
With the hardward you listed, I am amazed that some people think they
need high-priced equipment to make good songs.

Having said that, of course it would benefit greatly from some careful
mixing on the instrumentation, but hey, bravo dude. Nice job!
Check out my latest song called tick tock
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A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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