if you want people to listen to your song don't tell them
it's your first.

Not bad for a first effort but maybe a tad to long .

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This is very smooth, relaxing New Age style piece using
excellent sounds together in a wonderful mix. You did an
excellent job, first try or not. Great ear. Just a tad too
repetitive for me. But the percussion variations are
tasteful and well done. the "check this out" seems out of
place... and it isn't really an R&B track at all. Even tho it is
hip and stylish. Altho I could imagine it on a Nu R&B for
Lovers compilation...

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I like the mood of this piece. However, at some point I'd
really like to hear something else than loops. Find a lead
sound you like, and write a melody. On a slow track like
this you can just pencil in stuff.

Btw, that vocal sample is way out of character. Really.

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You figure out that the to loops can't be recognizable.

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