Alone by LWinston
Genre: Ethnic-International
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I was advised by a post not to say that this track is my very first Garageband creation but, I think it's pretty good for a 1st and I'm not ashamed of it. I can only get better. Letting everyone know its my first helps them with what comments they may share that (hopefully) will help me to get better. Please take a listen. This is something I came up with on a very lonely night.
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hacked_to_pieces
if you want people to listen to your song don't tell them
it's your first.
Not bad for a first effort but maybe a tad to long .
TobinMueller
This is very smooth, relaxing New Age style piece using
excellent sounds together in a wonderful mix. You did an
excellent job, first try or not. Great ear. Just a tad too
repetitive for me. But the percussion variations are
tasteful and well done. the "check this out" seems out of
place... and it isn't really an R&B track at all. Even tho it is
hip and stylish. Altho I could imagine it on a Nu R&B for
Lovers compilation...
TennesseeVic
I like the mood of this piece. However, at some point I'd
really like to hear something else than loops. Find a lead
sound you like, and write a melody. On a slow track like
this you can just pencil in stuff.
Btw, that vocal sample is way out of character. Really.
Sir Bass
You figure out that the to loops can't be recognizable.