Welcome to MacJams.
This is a great debut track.Both the lead vocal and backing vocal are very strong. I would like to hear the backing vocalist do a couple of solo's during the track. to give contrast with your rapping (which sounds very melodic and has a very good tone but seems continuous all through the song). I liked the mixture of beats and your choice of Loops. It would be good to see the Lyrics written and for someone who doesn't understand spanish like me it would be intersting in hearing an english version.(although it sounds great in Spanish)
Overall it is an edgy fresh sounding track with lots of attitude, great vocals and original lyrics. Nice work.
I look forward to hearing more of your music.

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Thankyou very much for all the acomplishments, well i will work on the translation to english. My sister did the chorus vocals, I am still learning but I think i will do better songs.
Thankyou very much.
DaroMode

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Muy bien hecho Daniel! Felicidades y bienvenido a MacJams.

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Muchas gracias por toda la ayudate lo agradezco mucho.
DaroMode

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Yeyo me puedes traducir la letra porfa.


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Negra la noche ya esta
La luna comienza a brillar
Brioso corcel y una capa volar
El Zorro esta por llegar.

Todo el que piense en el mal
Comience ya a temblar
Pues en cada brecha el zorro acecha
Y nadie se podra salvar.

Y desde California la historia del zorro nacio
Con Dieo y su destino que, ya nunca nadie olvido.
Su nombre brillara ZORRO trayendo esperanza al dolor.
Y el esta aqui no hay nada que temer
Pues Zorro siempre va a vencer.

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The night has turned black
The moon begins to shine
A spirited steed and a cape in the wind
El Zorro is on his way.

Anyone thinking to do evil
Should better start trembling in fear
For in every trail El Zorro waits ready
And not a one will get away

The story of Zorro was born in California
With Diego and his destiny that nobody ever forgot.
His name will ever shine, ZORRO,
delivering hope where there's pain.
He is now here, there's nothing to fear,
For Zorro will always conquer.

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This is a very good debut track! It really reflects your youthful energy and has a very infectious beat. The rap in Spanish is both pleasing and amusing, just because i haven't heard much of it. This is a very engaging introduction to Espanol rap. Hope to hear more from you! Thanks to Secamode for the translation, but hope you can put that in the song description. You Mode guys related by the way?

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thanks a lot i really apreciate it i will start working on my second track soon.
Español rap is very famous here there are very talented rappers here.
Well thanks a lot
DaroMode

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Well yes we are, we are brothers, SecaMode lives in USA and DaroMode lives in Mexico City but we like doing songs a lot.

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Si, mui bien hecho, y gratos 'tamos a tu irmano por dando el link en la chat. Que bien, Sergio!


Welcome to MacJams! Rock On!

. - Harold

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the arrangement and mix is very good, as is the rapping
(although as you'll no doubt know Hip-Hop rap is not my fort� or area of expertise - you might not have heard Carft yet or Rolo - which I would recommend, although I can say that not being able to understand the words meaning actually makes you more focused on the sound and lilt, phrasing etc) and you seem good at it to me.
I liked the backing singing touch was clever
(Zorro being dashing and a very romantic hero figure), you could bring sis up in the mix a bit. Good loop choices (still quite recognisable eg. starting with "Modern Rock Guitar 14"). Only thing I'd like to hear is that solo muted trumpet somewhere - as for me this is something synonymous with Zorro. (I loved those B&W films in particular as a kid). Apologies if my English is hard to understand - I get a bit verbose/wordy alot (ask your bro Sergio/Secamode ... I did wonder when he was a fan before you had posted anything ..lol) .. with such a musical family, you may be able to pull in some session musicians as a favour too. Thanks for sharing, keep up the good work.

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er .. "Craft" is the artist name I meant. Doh.

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"In Swedish, there is a subtle difference between being ugly or drunk"

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nice arrangements the singing makes this have alot of energy good back up singing to.welcome to mac jams

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Esto suena como tanto la diversi�n, y puedo honesto decir que nunca he o�do un rap sobre Zorro, y recuerdo que Zorro de la parte posteriora en los d�as negros y blancos de la demostraci�n de Walt Disney t.v. (bien, ' kay, reestrenos) el surco es phat y cobarde - reconozco algunos de los lazos, pero eso est� bien - el sentido de la energ�a grande aqu� es qu� est� obligando. �Trabajo de Niza en su primera vez hacia fuera - muy s�lida!

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welcome to macjams! this is a very impressive song! I look forward to hearing more.

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this is super excellent! you are very confident which is refreshing and charming! Yay! I'm psyched to hear more from you! --serena

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Well thanks very much, thankyou for the compliments.
This was my first song and I am glad you liked it
DaroMode

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For a guy of 14 years old, this is truely stunning. And not only for a 14 years old... :-) Your brother Sergio told me that you did this in only a couple of hours. Now tell me, is he a big liar, or are you just THAT talented?! And hell, where is my mask and my black cape. I have to go rescue a couple of very beautiful women!

- Walter

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Well thankyouu very mucha aain Walter, well i just dont know what to say, well umm he said the truth i did it in a couple hours.
So thanks again and VIVA ZORRO!!!
DaroMode

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Good hiphop song!!! Me a gustado mucho este rap!!! Mui bueno como primera cancion... Tu te as slbado com esta presentacion... :)

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