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| Gav said 1059 days ago (January 2nd, 2007) | |
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Cool Reminds me of something off the American Beauty soundtrack at the start. The heavy bit that comes in is cool and reminiscent of some Weezer stuff. I think it needs an injection of bass in the heavy bit - I thik it would lift it a bit more. I liked it very much - could be a bit longer for that kind of track. Check out my latest song called Understand
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| Ed Hannifin said 1059 days ago (January 2nd, 2007) | |
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I love the intro section... I bet that Mungo would appreciate the bell tones there... I agree with the slant of what Gav and Bizarre are suggesting, in terms of fattening up the bottom when it hits the more rocking part... I think it does, indeed, need "an injection of bass" at that bit, and I'd do it with some bass and with some crunchy rhythm guitar... Needs a whomping kick drum there, too... The track has that "guitar played on a keyboard" sort of sound at that point... Still the song is very songlike, dynamic and musical... Could be turned into song with lyrics... could be turned into a slightly more elaborate instrumental... could be a lead guitar tour de force... I'm glad I listened to this one... Ed Check out my latest song called Next Time Around (w/jiguma)
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| SmokeyVW said 1058 days ago (January 2nd, 2007) | |
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nice great mood sounds here. the guitar-like melody is nice. i like the effect of hammer-down notes, although it might be a tad hard to play that, so the illusion of guitar seems to falter. i do agree you need some activity in the bass register. stronger bass in the drums could do that, and/or a supporting bass line. perhaps bump up the EQ on the bass on the drums? or add a bass line made out of a riff from the bells in the intro might do nicely, and would tie up this song into a neat little package. but i mean all this as helpful hints - please take it that way! thanks for posting this Check out my latest song called One For Me
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| SEAC99 said 1058 days ago (January 3rd, 2007) | |
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Yikes. woah creepy dood. lol at first. but very nice guitar.. ad more reverb to make it sound more real idk how to explain it lol but great job. Check out my latest song called Borealis (Original Mix)
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DOCTORBIZARRE
Nice build up! Sounds like horror at the beginning! Then it gets creepy! I'm waiting for destruction! WOW! Cool! Sounds like things need a little EQ! More bass maybe! You have some cool ideas here! FInd a cool EQ setting and stick with it! A little too much treble.