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Piano movement I


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elfdaughter

 Genre: Classical

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Another one pencilled in note for note. There are a few places which I'm not happy with, and the ending is a bit weak, but hey, it's a work in progress....feedback very much appreciated!!

Artwork is done with Bryce 6.
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Uploaded: Jan 05, 2007 - 12:10:53 PM
Last Updated: Jan 05, 2007 - 12:10:53 PM Last Played: Nov 07, 2009 - 05:23:28 AM
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said 1054 days ago (January 5th, 2007)
note for note
excellent wow very expressive with a turning rolling trip through that painting. I cant hear what your un happy with i think its fantastic
elfdaughter said 1054 days ago (January 5th, 2007)
Thanks ego!
Thanks! There's just a few places where it seems to falter, to my hearing, anyway. If you can't hear it though, that's all to the good! :D

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Reinholt56 said 1054 days ago (January 6th, 2007)
I like the tune.
Yes the piece does falter at a couple of points, mainly at the end of sections and almost at the end there was a probable mistake, but the music itself has wonderful dynamics and the arpeggio portions sounds as though someone with rubber fingers is playing.

Great work. I think that you should continue with working on this piece as the end result, once you are happy with it, will be a likeable, flowing piece of piano music.

Have a great 2007.

R.
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elfdaughter said 1053 days ago (January 6th, 2007)
Rubber fingers...
Thanks Reinholt! I will keep working on it! :D

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Mystified said 1053 days ago (January 6th, 2007)
Nice start!
Wow...I'd not have the patience to pencil this in note by note!
So that alone is impressive to me!

Yes, there are limitations with the synth sounds but that's just the limitations with the synth sounds.

A little polishing on those endings, perhaps, but it's great how it is.
:)

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mtriviso said 1052 days ago (January 8th, 2007)
Yikes
I am out of breath! How do you play so quickly!

Are you sure you only have ten fingers?

I would like to have heard a sudden stop to release the building tension and then a quick climb up through a couple of octaves. But that could just be my tired old ears talking.
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