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tcarey asked a really great question on the main forum ie, how long does it take to write a song etc. This is the result after 18 mins.
Totally as it is. I suppose it is like a rough stetch etc. A first idea. Full of duff notes etc. (Sorry about the guitaring Cori)

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as made up

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Hits: 835
Comments: 13
Fans: 4
Plays: 90
Downloads: 51
Votes: 1
Uploaded: Jan 07, 2007 - 09:12:43 AM
Last Updated: Jan 07, 2007 - 09:12:43 AM Last Played: Apr 19, 2008 - 06:04:43 PM

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Acoustic. (1)

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garageband and my guitar

Comments

mtriviso	mtriviso said 1053 days ago (January 7th, 2007)
	This is Great You should develop this further. Check out my latest song called E-Minor Oct 2 2007

stevewhit	stevewhit said 1053 days ago (January 7th, 2007)
	Hi mt Thanks for listening and commenting. I think I will develop it further. Best Regards Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays

Roxylee	Roxylee said 1053 days ago (January 7th, 2007)
	18 minutes?? Such a humble tribute to your wife... Very pretty. :-) Check out my latest song called Sweet Grace

stevewhit	stevewhit said 1053 days ago (January 8th, 2007)
	From the humble one! er...thanks a lot Roxylee....You Ladies always stick together! Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays

	Goat Snc 88 said 1052 days ago (January 8th, 2007)
	Nice... Very nice. I love the gutair and you sound like James Blunt.

stevewhit	stevewhit said 1051 days ago (January 9th, 2007)
	Thanks Goat! Thanks for commenting Goat! Much Appreciated Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays

apb

apb said 1047 days ago (January 13th, 2007)

This could really be developed ...
.. and have hit potential. Your voice (excellent in this) reminds me of Phil Collins a bit. Simple and very effective .. the time changes on the string backing seem a bit ahead sometimes and the odd duff note to be penciled out, still amazing for 18mins. I can't get my guitar tuned in that time ...I'm sure if you ask MJers, you could get what you want for this one but perhaps that is not necessary .. just needs more time in the end spent on it, I'm sure you could come up with the goods.

Check out my latest song called Misplaced

stevewhit

stevewhit said 1047 days ago (January 14th, 2007)

Thanks Alan!
Thanks for your comments, especially about the construction of the song, ie; the strings being ahead etc, this is really helpful and exactly the sort of response I hoped for. I think that the question of how people write songs is so interesting and I love reading or listening to how others do this. Not being a musician as such GB offers me such a lot to play about with so your comment about opening it up to a collab sounds great (I assume that is what you mean). So once again Alan thanks for your comments.

Steve

Check out my latest song called schooldays

caroline	caroline said 1047 days ago (January 14th, 2007)
	awwww this is soo pretty - ty - i've gone all mushy now ... Check out my latest song called clink that link mjrf

stevewhit	stevewhit said 1045 days ago (January 16th, 2007)
	Hi Caroline! Thank you for your kind comments! Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays

	said 964 days ago (April 7th, 2007)
	: ) BEEEEAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUTIFUL . . . Tx Lena

mythago	mythago said 948 days ago (April 22nd, 2007)
	WOW This is so pretty! Reminds me of Damien Rice - you have a lovely soft voice Check out my latest song called A Break in the Skin

saymme	saymme said 585 days ago (April 19th, 2008)
	( : Just awesome to hear Your voice again Steve,it's so clear & great.. I really hope You'll post soon again God Bless Lena : )

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Name: Steve Whitworth

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