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Assault On The Universe


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relrick

 Genre: Rock & Roll
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For the Rockers. This is a redo of my first Mac Jams submission. I took it off a while ago, cause it was not a great recording. But I've always wanted to redo it, It's a new year, so it had to be done. Hope you enjoy.
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Lyrics
Come Inside
Put up your feet and stay awhile
We welcome You
The time is right for the rights of your life
Ongoing,
Extending to all Universally

Finally,
We reached the point of liberty
We welcome you
The time is right for the rights of your life
Ongoing,
Extending to all Universally
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Uploaded: Jan 08, 2007 - 12:32:54 PM
Last Updated: Jan 08, 2007 - 12:32:54 PM Last Played: Aug 19, 2009 - 02:23:40 PM
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Hardware:
EMac, Drums, Guitar, Bass, Yamaha mixer, voc. mic, and drum mic's. I-Mic,
Software:
Garage Band
Comments
Peter Greenstone said 1052 days ago (January 8th, 2007)
big rock
You got a cool power rock tune here. The guitar work is really quite good, particularly in some of those solo parts. The overall arrangement sounds good and filled out with some great driving power. Solid singing too. The timing is pretty sloppy (I think it's the drums that are off) but the energy is great.

This has a live concert sound to it. I think there are a lot of little things you could do to balance out the mix and tone a little better but it does sound quite good as it. I think it could use more volume on the bass guitar and a bit more clarity in the percussion. Were the drums recorded with just one mic? If you have multiple tracks of the drums I'd say spread them out a little.

I'd give the vocals a little more upper-mid EQ boost to clear them up and maybe give them some really short echo effect (something like the "early reflection" preset in GB's Track Echo effect); nothing too heavy.

Overall, a really cool rock tune.
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relrick said 1052 days ago (January 8th, 2007)
Thanks,
I appreciate the feedback. I'll see what I can do eq'ing wise. It's never been my strong point. I'm playing every instrument on this, so you are correct insofar that my drumming is off at times. However, I have a real drummer who will be re-doing the drums, so hopefully that will help. Once again thanks

Rick
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Vic Holman said 1050 days ago (January 10th, 2007)
great power chords
a nice cutting lead guitar. but hey you're playing the drums that counts for a lot (even if your recutting them) a click track can help. anyway it's rock n'roll and i like it!
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relrick said 1048 days ago (January 12th, 2007)
Thanks
Appreciate your words. I will let you know when it's redone with my drummer too. With the limited time I have, when I get something "almost" done, it's sometimes good enough for me to put up. Even thought after the fact I have to agree with all of you that the timing is off. But anyway thanks for the feedback

Rick
Check out my latest song called Dream Girl
said 1048 days ago (January 11th, 2007)
Cool anthem!
Big sound, great leads, spirited (and, truth be told, pretty good for an un-'real' drummer) drums. I will work my way back through your stuff. Good job!
relrick said 1048 days ago (January 12th, 2007)
Thanks
I like my stuff "over the top" a little bit. Soon I want to create something with cool explosions and rippin guitar and a symphony thrown in there for good measure. PS - That "Nocturnal Remission" song of yours is way cool.

Rick
Check out my latest song called Dream Girl
Mcboy said 1047 days ago (January 13th, 2007)
nice tone
on that git.......yeah a live drummer would be great for this track....kool vibe.....
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timothy devine said 730 days ago (November 26th, 2007)
I'll be back for more
go to go be responsible

love the way u fill the speakers with rock guitar

nice
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relrick said 729 days ago (November 26th, 2007)
you makin my day man!
Appreciate what ya sayin'
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