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Last Played: Aug 25, 2008 - 03:25:57 AM
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Uploaded: Jan 10, 2007 - 03:04:03 AM
Last Updated: Jan 10, 2007 - 03:27:31 AM
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Description:
a song about yearning & coincidence


(mix reuploaded & comment transferred)

a cute tune... — 01/10/07 - 02:45:59 AM

alfalpha
...Hun, this is very nice...I enjoyed it very much...you certainly have a way with lyrics & a melody hook!
Thank You!

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Lyrics:
Lyrics:
verse1
do you recall?
what happened during our last conversation

do you recall?
that we managed to sparkle into a connection

do you realise?
what we exchanged was a rather unconvention

do you recall?
how i was excited by your demeanour


chorus
i look forward to a sparkle
i'll wait for an accident
just wait
until it occurs

how i was excited to
how i was delighted by

how i was excited to
how i was delighted by

verse2
do you expect?
the same i've been praying for - a collision

do you desire?
that soon or later there'd be a recurrence

do you reckon?
that i'd be the one you're after

do you reckon?
do you reckon?

do you recall?
how i was excited by your demeanour
how i was delighted by your senses
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Great stuff &mdash 01/10/07 - 08:40:14 AM
I loved the drums coming in - your vocals are sweet too! I think the piano is a little too lound for me though - it could be brought down a bit. Your vocals get a little lost so maybe it should be doubled up to give it more substance (minor inssues for me and would make little difference to this beauty)? Very good - your melodies are very interesting. sweet!

GAv

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ohhh - this is lovely &mdash 01/10/07 - 10:40:52 AM
i'm glad i caught you pimping it!!! i agree with gav - take the piano down and that tick-a-tick noise is very distracting - lovely voice - lovely tune - ty for sharing xoxox

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delighted by your senses &mdash 01/10/07 - 02:01:30 PM
This is a very delightful song to listen to, you sound great. I know you've already remixed it, and I hate to pester. It's just that I think you've got a great voice and I wouldn't mind it being just a bit louder in the mix. That's all. Great job, I wish I had your voice!

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sweet &mdash 01/10/07 - 10:55:29 PM
What Gav said... I'm digging the song a whooole lot. It's sort of mysterious and trippy- espically the instrumentation. You've got a cool voice, that kinda reminds me of that Thom guy from Radiohead. My one prob... I thought the song went a little too long w/o the drums at the beginning. Otherwise, great job! Keep it up, man...

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High creativity &mdash 01/11/07 - 07:46:12 PM
I love the piano part, how you played it, the chord changes, the vocal delivery, the very unique nature of this song...

Like others, I think the vocal is a bit buried by the instruments, particularly the string synth, which at some points dominates the track and goes so high that it's a bit out of range for the sound. I would use it and the other instruments strictly as light support - emphasizing the strengths of the track, which to my ears are the vocals and the piano.

I especially enjoyed the piano/vocal opening. Very nice, very jazz oriented...

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a pleasure to listen to &mdash 01/12/07 - 10:48:49 PM
Unique piano playing, reminds me of Ben Folds and Incubus with a touch of Jamiroquai. nice singing something very different and exciting. great tune

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Solid .. &mdash 01/13/07 - 09:15:18 AM
I like this dreamier style. The piano and groove particularily fine. I agree with Sergio and Caroline on some mixing issues namely to bring the vocals up a little and sink the very loud tick-a-tick percussion.

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Old Standard Feel. &mdash 01/13/07 - 12:16:04 PM
This reminds me of the old standard, something similar to what Michael Buble is doing these days. I will definitely agree with the others that your vocals need to come forward in the mix, don't hide, them, they are great.

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