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Drum and flute by RonnieMolles [Email]

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Last Played: Nov 17, 2008 - 12:00:47 PM
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Uploaded: Jul 29, 2004 - 07:31:35 PM
Last Updated: Jul 29, 2004 - 06:24:40 PM
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Description:
This is another early song. It is autobiographical and the vocals are from a single take. I just opened my mouth and this came out. It needs work on the vocal levels etc... but I think I have gotten the macjams bug from this wonderful site and just had to post something else today. Again, feedback is welcome.

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several thousand gallons of booze, some cigs, a change and a mac =)


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rhymes and phrases &mdash 07/30/04 - 08:57:21 PM
i love your sexy lower voice. and i love that this poem seems so personal and true. but the short phrases mixed with the repetitive rhyme scheme, all done so like you are reading, that it takes away from the power of your message. too sing-songy, even with our great voice. it is most effective toward the end when you break from the repeating rhyme schemes. but then the flute seems to meander in this minor middle eastern way that maybe makes sense if it is about the Christmas star, but didn't make sense to me musically. but i'd love for you to do more poetry, you have a wonderful voice to listen to.

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rhymes and phrases &mdash 09/02/04 - 06:48:46 PM
Thanks!

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