There is a lot that is really good here and had me trippin out.
I like the drums even though they are quite hot in the mix. I like the guitars especially the lead which could perhaps stand out in the mix a little bit.

Tell me about your vocal mic and set up. I agree that it could still use a little bit of work. In a couple of places it sounds like you could have used a good pop filter and in ta couple of places it sounds really harsh.

This song is railly nice with great lyrics ... I'm glad you posted it.

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production level, very good, like the guitar a lot, drum loops are what they are although you did vary them a little , something I should do more, Vocal sounded good too, thanks for sharin'

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about being one man bands on this site. shows all around talent. the lead guitar should of been up higher in the mix. really want to hear it, but it's back to far :-(

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for the comment, all criticisim is helpful good or bad, in fact there is no bad
I thought i`d let you know I put the other verson of this song that I recorded with an actual drummer with a pop filter on my mic and lots of compression on my voice, problem was at the time I didnt want it to be a rock song the drummer got carried away and sped it up , all I had was 3 hrs booked so I didnt go back and slow it down, it was orgionally made for an acoustic guitar at a slower bluesy pace ,

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this is workin really well - dig the guitar and vox - the overall vibe is good - but I agree that the drums are a little hot and the lead too low. Minor crits. Welcome to MJJ - you're off to a great start.

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I like your voice. and the beats are awesome.
Like it.
DaroMode

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i really dig the vocals, both the sound and the lyrics
nice job

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...your bio, and i laughed to myself. i remember recording things betweentwo ghetto blasters, trying to balance the tae volume with that of your guitar/voice/hands slappingknees because you don't have a drummer...ahh, the good old days.
anyway, i like the picture, singing in your living room, guitar in lap. thatls such a familiar setting for me.
cool tune, i think i like this better than the original demo version. i just got my i-mac too, and i'm faced with the dilema of recording everything again from scratch, or just moving on with new inspirations. it's tough because i've never had this quality to work with, so i wonder what i could do with the old jams.
keep on truckin' man.

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