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| said 2344 days ago (January 18th, 2007) | |
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THis shows promise just got to get the timing right expand on this I think it could become something great LoL! |
| [.xXDawgXx.] said 2343 days ago (January 19th, 2007) | |
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DAWG MAN thats pimp son! |
| Gav said 2342 days ago (January 20th, 2007) | |
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Needs work Hi Tiffany, I'm aware thats its just the workings of a track and it sounds like you are just getting the hang of things which is great. I have listened to it quite a few times and there is something very workable there - its quite a catchy little tune. It needs expansion and development though. Maybe you could start off with the bass (as you have it at the end) and bring in the beat and then the Piano. Maybe some more/different instruments. Also try diffent arrangements against the bass melody as its a very good bass line to create a foundation to work on! Hope thats of some help! Gav Check out my latest song called Understand
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| YOURxTWiSTEDxPRiNCESS said 2340 days ago (January 22nd, 2007) | |
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thanks Thank you so much! lol Check out my latest song called This is le best...& u no it
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perceptualvortex
It's a beginning. The timing on the piano seems a little free for techno; you could align it to the 8th notes and it would be more solid. If you work on this more, you could get a good groove together; get several good grooves together and you can arrange them into a full-on techno song!