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This is the first song I wrote since my return from Cambodia/Vietnam.
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Lyrics
Your harmless face, could stand here and watch me dissappear?
Oh my, don't think I could stand to watch this one go.
Once or twice, wouldn't it be nice to spend just a day or two, just to be here with you
should you, make it clear, thats what mostly I fear.
I find it hard to play that card.
When times not my side.
Oh my, don't think I could stand to watch this one go.
Once or twice, wouldn't it be nice to spend just a day or two, just to be here with you
should you, make it clear, thats what mostly I fear.
I find it hard to play that card.
When times not my side.
composerclark
Very good job here. I really like the mystery of the lyrics, the sparse/simple accompaniment and the singing. There's a mid-high frequency hum that you may want to get rid of... it's the kind of sound you sometimes get when you don't use a pre-amp for the mike.
A thought I had about the ending is to (a) not repeat that last line ("Once or twice..."), and when you get to "just to be here with you" have the voice alone, without instrumental accompaniment, and maybe with reverb boosted on the last word.
Just a thought. Great song, though!