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| Parichayaka said 1012 days ago (January 31st, 2007) | |
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Very nice theme... And it works well to build up on with different layers and instruments. I really enjoyed it a lot. Now since you're asking for feedback and I've got a big mouth, here are a few ideas. First of all a second theme to would help to keep the interest, would also help to frame it and give you opportunities to introduce lead instruments in a more structured way. The guitar sound is great, slightly distorted, but melodic enough to carry the sweet melody before it becomes a full on e-guitar sound. The drums are nice and come in just right, but I'd go easy on the open hi-hat, it's just a little too prominent at times. A 1/8 beat closed hi-hat or ride cymbal could help frame the last part. Not sure if any of thas makes sense, but this is a very nice piece, and I couldn't stop my inspiration! Cheers. Check out my latest song called f12
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| elektronix said 1012 days ago (January 31st, 2007) | |
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wonderful theme It is not my matter to criticize here... (I have to post more songs first, I believe...), but I got two ideas, which I will post here as my two pence: First, I´ve had immediately a video in my head. A digicam in a car, driving through a huge city by night, Hamburg i.e., beginning in little roads in a residential area, to larger city drives, then a drive-through of the Elbe tube, ending on a german highway at 100mph, the "A7", which has a very impressive look at the Hamburg Port, one of the largest in Europe. Second, to match this video, it would be nice, if the song would be developed in a kind of mood, which comes near to Ravel's well known "Bolero". The song has already a kind of this driving mood. It is hard to express, what I mean, english is not my native language...but perhaps you understand, what I want to say... If this song is finished, I would be proud to make video and cut for you and I would sit on my hands, not to touch your work:-) Nice tune! Thanks for sharing! elektronix Check out my latest song called autumn in my mind
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THe structure is good, I like when the bass comes in.
I would shorten the intro and bring in the drums sooner and make the lead part longer. but beside that its good nice and tight.