song for Carole

stevewhit

Genre: Ballad

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Ok I admit it, I'm hopeless sayng "I love you" so here it is my first sketch of a love song to my dear wife Carole written in 3 minutes, but she is worth so much more time than that!

And ok she will probably kick my head in when she sees the pic - but hey I still love her!

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Song Stats

Hits: 808
Comments: 10
Fans: 3
Plays: 51
Downloads: 42
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Uploaded: Feb 02, 2007 - 08:51:17 PM
Last Updated: Feb 08, 2007 - 07:32:57 PM Last Played: Oct 08, 2008 - 12:04:57 PM

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Creative Commons License:
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Keywords:

love (1150)

Hardware:

gb/mac

Software:

gb of course (what else)

Comments

Roxylee	Roxylee said 1024 days ago (February 2nd, 2007)
	Lovely... You wrote this in 3 minutes? Wow... What a great tribute to Carole. Thank you for sharing it with us. :-) Check out my latest song called Sweet Grace

stevewhit	stevewhit said 1024 days ago (February 2nd, 2007)
	Thanx Rox! I was hoping you wouldn't mention the 3 minutes. Now I'm feeling guilty thinking iI should have made it 3 1/2 minutes!!! Steve x Check out my latest song called schooldays

stevewhit	stevewhit said 1024 days ago (February 2nd, 2007)
	Thanx Rox! I was hoping you wouldn't mention the 3 minutes. Now I'm feeling guilty thinking I should have made it 3 1/2 minutes!!! Steve x Check out my latest song called schooldays

stevewhit	stevewhit said 1024 days ago (February 2nd, 2007)
	OH NO! I'M BEING TOO EXPOSED!!! Check out my latest song called schooldays

paul f. page

paul f. page said 1023 days ago (February 4th, 2007)

Ballad
Steve,
Carole's a lucky woman when such beautiful music is written to show your love. Your tune is just about as gentle as can be and the lyrics straight from your heart. If you develop the song a bit, a lush orchestra of Montevanti-type strings should be coming in...right about now as the chorus soars. I can hear it all now. What a wonderful thing, sharing your heart with the world. Thank you.
Peace.
Paul
P.S. CD is on its way tomorrow.

Check out my latest song called Double Etude

stevewhit	stevewhit said 1023 days ago (February 4th, 2007)
	Thanks Paul! Thanks for you comments Paul, If only I could play and arrange like you do!! I'll have a go at what you suggest, thanks for being so encouaging and thanks for the cd, I just can't wait. Steve Check out my latest song called schooldays

bud	bud said 1023 days ago (February 4th, 2007)
	This is a beautiful tribute and a good song to boot. How'd you record this? I'm not a production snob so don't feel you have to defend anything. I really like the immediacy you captured here. Check out my latest song called eye for you (w/particledots and michael2)

stevewhit

stevewhit said 1023 days ago (February 4th, 2007)

Hi Bud!
Hi Bud! Thanks for yor comments, basically I just stook the jack lead from my guitar into the back of my imac. The lead is from Apple and cost abouy £14 and I sang into the built in mic on the imac. I know the sound isn't too good technically but I just treated it as a rough sketch really. I will be looking into buying a proper mic at some stage, whether I will be capable of using it though is another matter, with balances etc.
I did get a comment from Carole that she thought I could have sang it a lot better, I did explain to her that that was the effect I wanted, ie not too polished etc. So your comments are very encouraging - thanks again Bud

Steve

Check out my latest song called schooldays

Cori Ander	Cori Ander said 1018 days ago (February 9th, 2007)
	Beautiful Woderful. Love. True love. Ahhhhhhh .. that's beautiful! Check out my latest song called Guitar test — Martin CSN (Gerry Tolman Tribute)

RickW	RickW said 1016 days ago (February 11th, 2007)
	What emotion! Steve, obviously this came straight from the heart. You and Carole are very blessed to have found true love. Few of us do... God bless you both, Rick Check out my latest song called Picture of Perfection (MJRF)

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Artist Info

Name: Steve Whitworth

Hi everyone, thanks for looking into my site. I like different types of music from classic rock to easy listening. I hope to learn a lot from joining MACJAMS and thank everyone for helping me to do this. Best Regards Steve... [see more]

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Genre Info

A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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