A really nice song. Well done on all levels. I would love to hear this re-mixed with the bass part a little lower in volume, the strings slightly louder and and some overall echo or reverb. I think some echo would let the nice acoustic guitar ring out and bring some longing and melancholy to the vocals. I really liked it a lot!

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Heartfelt and sincere music. I want to marry you.

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Very nice song, but the mix is coming across kind of harsh to my ears. Don't know if it's my sound card, or your mix, but it sounds like it's got too much high end, and is kind of "essy," if you know what I mean. I like a crispy guitar sound, but I think this one could stand to be a bit more round--does that make sense?

Otherwise, very sweet song with nice harmonies! Keep 'em coming!

JIm

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Gave me chills in spots (that's a good sign!). Voice and arrangement are stellar. Love the lyrics. Only problem I see is production. Got to kill that dreaded white noise at the beginning and end. Also, though the up front mix messed with me at the beginning of the song, I grew to like it more by the end, but I can't help think there are some mixing issues. Some harshness where I think you want smoothness and beauty.

Hope you guys start getting some notice on MJs and elsewhere.

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