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Take this cup from me by Livingstone [Email]

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Hits: 523
Comments: 8
Votes: 2
Plays: 100
Last Played: Oct 15, 2008 - 11:48:13 AM
Downloads: 43
Fans: 2
Uploaded: Feb 18, 2007 - 11:50:20 PM
Last Updated: Feb 19, 2007 - 12:06:50 AM
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Description:
a work in progress
just started it today sunday feb 18
an answer to my babys mother

some seperations are not self explanatory
input will be good I do have to adjust the timing
on the bridge, I mostly wanted to try it out I will fix it ,
NOT TOO BAD FOR drum loops huh?

Lyrics:
she turned her back again on me today
she wont let nobody love her
a simple pill release is her best friend
it kills the pain thats inside her
an ohh I wish that I could be that friend
how I wish I could find her
I showed her my world and she shook my world on me

how can she ask the world of me
I wasnt born to be her savoir
so many times I tried
so many tears I cried
I ask to take this cup from me

so many people cant let go of life tearing at their soul
they from day to day in pain or fear or crying over their sorrow
all they have to do is let it be and they will get through tomorrow
cause he wont give us anything unjust
yes were born to be free
she never figured out the chioce I`ve made
the love thats inside of me
for four long years I watched her kick and scream
oh how I wish she could see

GIVE IT UP GIVIN IT UP BA BY
LET IT ALL GO LET IT ALL GO GIRL
SET YOURSELF FREE SET YOURSELF FREE DARLIN
YOU GOTA LET GO DONT HOLD ONTO THIS WORLD
CAUSE NOBODY KNOWS NOBODY KNOWS CHI LD
HOW HARD I TRIED HOW HARD I`VE TRIED GIRL

why does she ask the world of me
I wasnt born to be her savior
how many times I tried
how many teard i cried
I ask to take this cup from me

Hardware:
guitar (vantage)
keys (m-audio/ ozone)
phones (sony)
mic (psr dynamic DE-10 Imp.250)

Software:
garage band
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NICE WORK! &mdash 02/19/07 - 12:04:25 AM
Wow, great work with the guitar and strings. The vocal is engaging from the start. You've really captured the mood of the lyrics with the music. Thanks for entertaining me with your artwork tonight.

Peace to you, Joe

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Thanx &mdash 02/19/07 - 08:23:25 AM
I love input as much as the process
now that I`ve actually listened to it , I hear some adjustments that need to be made, I`m gonna stick with this one for a few weeks and then return it to the collective...........
I do enjoy this way of sharing and getting feedback........

Scott l.

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check my homepage on youtube for some videos for the song on here

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Hey Scott! &mdash 02/19/07 - 12:47:20 PM
Emotion fits the theme nicely. Great voice. In fact you can bring it out even more!

Great comp.

Doug

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I enjoyed listening to this song.... &mdash 02/20/07 - 01:53:24 PM
It will be worth working on this some more.

I'll look forward to hearing the version that you will be more happy with.

Take care.

Paul.

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Very cool &mdash 03/12/07 - 09:51:38 PM
The lyrics are realy good. I like all aspects of this song. I see you did this in one day. I think if you just pull the drums together , mabye not use the bongo sound as much. Just my opinion but the potentail here is great. Agian the lyrics are very strong

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Livingstone &mdash 03/23/07 - 06:29:52 AM
I think it's a pretty cool song. Just needs to eq-ed a little. The bass doesn't fit too well with the rest.
Deep lyrics.
Lavalamp

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Thanx everyone &mdash 09/28/07 - 07:38:26 AM
I went and deleted the files so I`d have to start from scratch to tweak this one..
lyrics wise I think I got down what I was feeling at that time...
the drums and bass need to be worked together ALOT better
the guitar with the strings have a good feel for the mood of the song
would you beleive I forgot all about this one since like june when I last logged onto this site.(I had a busy summer)

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Great song &mdash 01/21/08 - 06:40:01 AM
here. The vocal and lyrics are really good and I like the use of the strings. I do hope you get to progress this!
Adam

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