the melody and lyrics. This is a cool background instrumental track. I found myself humming and singing a tune along with it. I do like your guitar work and the subtle background vocals (?). I'd love to put a melody to this. Better still, you should!

Jack

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keyboard

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I guess I am hearing things. Something in the background, duh! Still, I like it.

Jack

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I really like this melody and tone of the whole song. I didn't want it to end. If you do decide to put lyrics,I think they should be kept minimal since the song has a strong presence on its own.

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Yes, the song stands well on its own!
...but if you do add vocals, they should be simple and secondary to the
music

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Hey Lily, this is brandon, give me another email if you read this, accidentally deleted your other one

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You have a way of writing catchy, tune-filled music. Even
if there is no real melody. What a feat. You have a terrific
sense of what works and what doesn't. Loved the subtle
keys.

Yeah, would love to hear some voice on this track. Maybe
a kick-ass bass solo. Teehee.



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Very simple but very nice. I like some of the keyboard
sounds your using. The drums are basically appropriate,
and the guitar is nice an chordy. Outside of an excercise, I
wouldn't give this sketch too much merit, but I think this
was something thinking out loud, and I think it sounds
pretty good as just that. Almost ghostly, those keys....

kindly kind,
mister fosod.

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It sounds like some nostalgia ! Indeed, it makes
you want to hum something both sour an comforting...


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This is an awesome piece of art. No vocals needed if you
ask me, I think it works very well on it's own. I could
easily see a video go with this one though - a grainy black
and white Super-8 track... I am saying this because it
gives me pictures in my head... A definitive download!

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