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Keywords:
piano (590), dark (298), instrumental (408), pop (445), synth (248), midi (60)
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Description:
A work in progress ... maybe additional vocals could be fine? Any annotations, suggestions and votings are welcome.
Hardware:
Mac G5,
M-Audio Keystation
Software:
Logic Express 7.x
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direction &mdash 02/27/07 - 09:17:53 AM
I like where you are taking this To me it is more progressive Dont know what you plan on adding to me it seems complete Good rythm. [ Reply to This ]
Variation &mdash 02/27/07 - 09:34:18 AM
Thanks ego for stopping. Maybe you are right ... the parts sound too similar to the my ears. I will have to let it rest.. [ Reply to This ]
GOOD BUILD &mdash 02/27/07 - 09:31:29 AM
Bass keeps us grounded and going in the Direction.
There is a melancholy image in the background of this Sound Painting; pensive, more than dark.
Longing, perhaps.
The finish fade could be longer, less sudden after the lengthy presentation/dialogue.
A FINE Listen.
Best Regards,
Cooper [ Reply to This ]
Thanks, Cooper &mdash 02/27/07 - 09:41:02 AM
for your comments. Apropos bass ... I'm still disconcerned about the bassline and the ending.
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Annotations &mdash 02/27/07 - 09:39:25 AM
There is room for additional voices, such as strings or synth sweeps and short repetition phrases.
As well as the opportunity to compress these elements into a shorter statement, that emerges more quickly after the proper build, which You Already have Here (that should not be shortened as it is prelude to all the other gestures that follow).
VBR,
Cooper [ Reply to This ]
I agree ... &mdash 02/27/07 - 09:46:07 AM
to all points. Until now I reflected, if the structure/built up is o.k. Yes, vocals would be a great deal ... the people out there are welcome. [ Reply to This ]
i can hear voice in here &mdash 02/28/07 - 05:37:30 AM
easy to imagine &mdash 02/28/07 - 05:42:12 AM
I keep coming back... &mdash 05/23/07 - 07:10:45 AM
...to listen to this song. It's really colorful and packed with dark melodies. This is my kinda sound from my favorite romantic electric era. You have really good influences that have enriched your style. [ Reply to This ]
Welcome back, Steve &mdash 05/23/07 - 10:37:36 AM
I'm brain-washed by completely different styles of music (everything between electronic and hard rock, even gothic metal). Guess, this one is influenced by ... lets say ... wolfsheim, kraftwerk, tomcraft, phallus dei and maybe a breeze of conjure one. [ Reply to This ]
welcome back, bob &mdash 05/24/07 - 04:49:30 AM
the last post was adressed to bob (not steve). Sorry, for the blackout, bob! [ Reply to This ]
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