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| Sista Mac said 1938 days ago (August 5th, 2004) | |
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nice Thank You Black Lily! Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying
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| Sista Mac said 1938 days ago (August 5th, 2004) | |
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nice Thanks for checkin' it out McBoy and your very cool comments!!! Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying
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| Mcboy said 1938 days ago (August 5th, 2004) | |
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vocals... r great.....love it.....the background vocal panning is cool...... Check out my latest song called Heros( aclarke/mcboy)
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| Sista Mac said 1934 days ago (August 8th, 2004) | |
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vocals... Thanks Mcboy for your nice comments and noticing the panning. I thought it would give it a cool effect . Glad you liked it! Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying
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| peeg said 1938 days ago (August 5th, 2004) | |
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Lovely Song Well performed, good sound. Perhaps a simple bass line? But what do I know.... Check out my latest song called Wishing I Was Dead
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| Sista Mac said 1938 days ago (August 5th, 2004) | |
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Lovely Song Thanks Peeg, Ya Know... maybe a bass line. I've yet to put one in any of my songs. That 's the next step I must take! Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying
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| dchapman said 1938 days ago (August 5th, 2004) | |
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Maybe... ...the backing could've been more ambitious. There's nice vocal movement and I was left wanting to hear more accompanyment. There's so much space to build this one up. I would've done the production much differently. The voice has a soft quality... i'm not so sure a stomping kick drum and super tight snare were the best pick. But like i said, nice vocals... I would have done the production much differently. Let's see how you grow. Check out my latest song called Waiting for the Other
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| Sista Mac said 1934 days ago (August 8th, 2004) | |
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Maybe... Interesting thoughts dchapman! Now you've peeked my interest on how someone else would have put this songs together. I am very open to variation, and someone else's vision would be really neat to see (Hear)! Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying
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| Cameron said 1938 days ago (August 5th, 2004) | |
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nice vocals Your vocals are getting better and better, your increasing confidence shows! Better mix this time! Your voice has a very good quality in general, well in-tune, and I like your subtle nuances and phrasing. Good guitar and you vary the drum track nicely, especially in the second half of the track. The only aspect of this song which I personally could find slight improvement with is that the chord progression seems a bit repetitive. You've got a good set of chord changes but I wish there was just a bit more variety to them. But maybe you were going for sort of a trance-like quality in this song. It's almost a mantra. In any case, you've produced a good song here! Check out my latest song called EPONYM
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| Sista Mac said 1934 days ago (August 8th, 2004) | |
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nice vocals Cameron, thank you very much for listening and your thoughts. They are much appreciated. I will give the chord progession some thought. Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying
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| gudkarma said 1936 days ago (August 7th, 2004) | |
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that picture gets me so hot. how can i be expected to pay attention to the song? geisha girl sex sells songs! Check out my latest song called Ocean The
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| mcsweb said 1936 days ago (August 7th, 2004) | |
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Your tone is very sweet. But like me, I'm not sure you're always hitting the notes, and your time appears to be off at times. Tightening the time and the pitch will make an unbelievable difference in the level of your music, BECAUSE your tone is so sweet already, and your song is engaging. The devil's in the details and they really make the difference, especially in music production. Check out my latest song called Pearls of Perfection
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| Sista Mac said 1934 days ago (August 8th, 2004) | |
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Your tone Thanks for your comments and suggestions mcsweb. I know like anything else in the creative process, it is continuous learning. I am definitely a novice since I've only produced 3 GarabeBand songs. I will definitely take your thoughts into consideration on my next one and hopefullly I will do better! Check out my latest song called I'm Not Trying
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BlackLily
vocal confidence is showing better