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This is a song I made over DJ Werd's "Butterfly Effect"
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| atomic6262 said 1000 days ago (March 2nd, 2007) | |
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Thanks Thanks man I appreciate the comments. Production is definetly my weak point but practice makes perfect. Check out my latest song called Dark
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| musichead said 998 days ago (March 4th, 2007) | |
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good This is nice.. I agree dreadmon on the production. Im an old guy when it comes to rap..But I have listened to what my sons listened to.. And this stays right with what they have listened too. I really liked it..keep up the good work.... post some more!!! Check out my latest song called Lets Take a Holiday
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| said 998 days ago (March 4th, 2007) | |
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Very cool Nice flow you got goin on Just lower the volume a hair. You might want to lower the reverb . All in all A very well composed rap. Lyricly you got it on. |
| DJ WERD said 995 days ago (March 7th, 2007) | |
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hey im happy to hear that you like my beat. your vocals are a little loud and demanding for attention but that lyrical content is nice. only sugestion would be to take down the vocals a bit. nice. Check out my latest song called YO 808 vol. H20 - ext. homospien mannifestation
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| falzaabi said 983 days ago (March 19th, 2007) | |
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cool man there is no bet, make tha bet higher, voice as dredman say , keep it up 1 love yo Check out my latest song called HOW NICE
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| craft said 981 days ago (March 21st, 2007) | |
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I can... dig this one!!! Your voice is too loud in the mix and I like it a lot!! Great rhymes... Well done!!! Check out my latest song called Blue Lights (feat. Spleenveil)
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dreadmon
Nice rap - you've got good diction and good rhymes. However, the vocals are a little too loud for the mix, especially the left channel "I Can't" refrain, it's louder than your main rap. I don't know if it was your intention, but the lead rap vox sounds distorted like your recorded it too hot. A rap like this needs to be in your face, so the reverb seems a bit much - a little too wet. Other than that - you seem confident in your abilities rapping and writing - just some fine-tuning in the production department and you'll have 'em right where you want 'em. Peace.