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| Kharismatic said 1921 days ago (August 18th, 2004) | |
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Good production Maybe. Working on a few angles with this one. possibly have another band record this Check out my latest song called All Around The World
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| TobinMueller said 1930 days ago (August 10th, 2004) | |
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Great work I really enjoyed all the production values you worked into this track. Nice tight arrangement, great vocal layering. Solid pop lyrics and construction. Good use of GB sounds. I especially like your false pseudo and the shoo-doo-wop section. The lead solo that follows could use more syncopation to be as hip as the whole. Sound like Jimi Hendrix singing pop. The whistling at the end was the frosting on the cake. Really entertaining tune. Check out my latest song called Forge A New Life (MJRF)
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| Kharismatic said 1921 days ago (August 18th, 2004) | |
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Great work Well thank you. I have been influenced by him so I take that as a compliment. As for the solo, I could have taken a better one or extended it, but I think it works the way it is. I do appreciate the critique. It helps if outside people comment on things like that just so we can get a different perspective that we weren't thinking about at the time and help to develop our music. Check out my latest song called All Around The World
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| mcsweb said 1929 days ago (August 11th, 2004) | |
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This almost has an old Motown sound to it. Very refreshing! Maybe it's just my ears but some of the lower background vocals sound a tad flat... Check out my latest song called Pearls of Perfection
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| mcsweb said 1929 days ago (August 11th, 2004) | |
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BTW Isn't this pop? I think that's where you might want to put this one. Check out my latest song called Pearls of Perfection
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| Cameron said 1924 days ago (August 15th, 2004) | |
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early 70s nice This reminds me of a mellow version of KC and the Sunshine Band..."Shake your Booty". The phrase structure is almost identical. It works well though! A little Philadelphia sound there too. Production values on this are very high, good tune, and very well sung, performed. The whistles were a nice touch! Check out my latest song called EPONYM
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| Kharismatic said 1921 days ago (August 18th, 2004) | |
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early 70s nice A lot of TSOP goin on. Grew up listening to Blue Notes, O'Jays, Teddy, Mcfadden & Whitehead. Also the shoo-do-wop is a nod to Stevie. J5 do it on stevie's 'You Haven't Done Nothin' '. I think that most of my other stuff not dealing with Hip-Hop sounds like this. Check out my latest song called All Around The World
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| UncleSamwich said 1755 days ago (January 31st, 2005) | |
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Could be the theme for: 1.) THE SEQUEL TO PRETTY IN PINK. 2.) THE SEQUEL TO TEEN WOLF 3.) THE SEQUEL TO 16 CANDLES 4.) THE SEQUEL TO ....ANY TEENAGE 80'S MOVIE WITH ANTHONY MICHAEL HALL, MOLLY RINGWALD OR , ROB LOWE. WOULD MAKE A GREAT B SIDE TO THE ST ELMO'S FIRE SINGLE. Catchy, poppy, clear,... and don't friggin do it man. She'll never appreciate you the way you appreciate her. Go for the hot cheerleader, not your best friend. Classic mistake we've all been led to believe is the happy ending by hollywood. Go for the one with the best five pound hams, because in the end they all turn out to just be the #1 person who bugs the shh- nike out of you. You can always stare at her hot body when she's yelling at you for not picking your socks up off the floor, but not if shes just the "plain old best friend kind of looks". Oh ya...keep the song too. True Love only exists in music not in relationships. Just kidding? Check out my latest song called Five Pound Samwitch
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macapa
Nice, professionnal sound. Well played. Good timing. I'm
no expert, but this sounds very radio ready to me.