for using only the loops, but it does sort of ramble on and
on . . . but it is still nicely adjusted.

There's been a small debate around here regarding Loop
usage, I think this should go into the 'Classical' catagory,
but that's just me.

I won't rate this because I am too familiar with all of the
loops you used, but I will say that you've used them
better than most beginners have, for a piano piece.

Maybe you could carry on with it and fix that ubrupt
ending.

-Cheers!

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Thanks for the listen up and the input. The length was with intent of
somthing to drive with I changed the listing to classical. There isn't a listing
for just piano. I don't know what you mean about the abrupt ending. For
some reason I not allowed to receive all the data of any song or download so i
don't know what you mean. The ending that i have is with a strong cord
fading to infinity. Thanks again

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You're in driver's seat now with GB and, like all us, lovin'
it! This compostion is well done. Thank you for sharing a
bit about your being (in this song description and in your
bio). Your roots run deep. Continue to nourish them.

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But one question: where's the next post? I presume you're
working on it.

This is very nice, very clean--even with the reverb.

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As has already been said, you've done a good job with
these loops -- better than a lot of what I've heard. You've
maintained a consistent mood throughout the song.

I would definitely like to hear you play the piano on your
own without loops -- you've got a good ear. It will be
easier to achieve your goals as stated in your description
of this piece if you play your own stuff.

The ending was way too abrupt; that last chord came out
of nowhere and didn't fit what you did before.

Nice job though.

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I was very surprized to see that this was just loops. Don't
use them much myself. I think you have done really well
to string it all together into a coherent piece. Nice tension
in parts as well.

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Thanks for taking the time in making a comment. I had to post something in
leu of working on some of the other tunes. I wish i could really play like this.
But GB really comes through when you pinch hard enough.

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it is surprising how you can imagine someone poundin'
those keys. I think it is very well put together. The second
half is much stronger in content and in emotion and the
whole piece could probably be more if a quarter of the
first half is edited. Just so you know the ending is cut off
so maybe you can upload the song again.
pura vida
jo


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I guess I'm not familiar with the loops in GB, because it
sounds like a complete new piece to me; I would never
guess it was loops. Amazing!

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Thank you. That is probably the hight of complements attainable for a
production using the medium as such. I tried to capture a feeling of the real
sense of the piano for what I had to workd with, imagination and a knowledge
of music in arranging the paticular pieces and ajusting the tonal quailty.

Thank you for taking the time to make a comment.

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