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Uploaded: Mar 26, 2007 - 10:46:46 PM
Last Updated: Mar 26, 2007 - 11:42:04 PM
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sunrise (15), perfect (5), horizon (4), siva (1), moon (35), diamond (3), mists (1), connected (1), newborn (2)
Description:
I saw the most incredible Sunrise last week it was so beautiful... it moved me to write a few words about it..
Then Neil came up with this track which suited it so perfectly...
I want to dedicate this song to Neil, Sally and their newborn child Evelyn who was born a couple of days ago... she is "PERFECT"

Music....doddster73
Vocals and lyrics....itiswotitis
Artwork introduces Evelyn
and depicts Siva bringing up the sunrise from his shell after the new moon otherwise known as the Siva moon and protecting us and looking loving ly over the newborn!

Lyrics:
PERFECT

itiswotitis

The first song of the morning
this is the first song of the day
This is the first song of our future
Perfect in every way


it was just so beautiful sitting under the purple tibouchina tree
and every thing was so perfect silver crescent moon shone in the blue sky’s
siva’s moon
sweeping down to bright glowing orange and gold
in contrast against the blue grey hills
with their creamy mists swirling in the valley s and dips with the
yellow morning sun shining thru the clouds
and making rainbows and diamond mists.

This is the first song of the morning
this is the first song of the day
This is the first song of exisistence
Perfect in every way

golden bursts of light flashing thru the trees
like pots of gold glowing in the forests.
The whip birds sang their beautiful song
and the black cockatoo’s flew up high over head
screeching their plaintiff call to all who would listen
whilst the warm gentle breeze caressed my body and soul

The first song of the morning
this is the first song of the day
This is the first song of our future
Perfect in every way



and the view stretched far across rolling hills
over distant mountains to the ocean’s sparkling turquoise horizon
The morning was filled with the golden glowing energy of a new day to come.
perfect

we are connected energised alive and whole
like an new born child

perfect
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GROOVALISTICA! &mdash 03/26/07 - 11:02:13 PM
Coolidge! Like the feel and the euphoria created in this song! Swank if I might say so myself!

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perfect. &mdash 03/26/07 - 11:04:44 PM
i think you nailed it with the title. perfect.

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Psychedelic &mdash 03/26/07 - 11:29:46 PM
Lots of cool aural candy. Very groovy!

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Hello! &mdash 03/27/07 - 02:59:14 AM
Cant listen now, im at work. Congratulations! I know you always put a lot of effort in your tracks. Until I listen, i wish u a good night night.

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Very cool &mdash 03/27/07 - 03:47:07 AM
A good morning listen. Excellent sound.

Cheers

Dick

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hi there &mdash 03/27/07 - 05:52:37 AM
glad you liked it!

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Oh Yeah! &mdash 03/27/07 - 04:38:27 AM
Cant get enough of this song.
Love it
Here's the pics I promised Jo!!

http://twistednervemusic.multiply.com/
Go on have a laugh.......

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Nice ONe &mdash 03/27/07 - 05:10:42 AM
Col....very cool story....love the pics>>>>

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warmth &mdash 03/27/07 - 05:20:47 AM
Thats the word that comes to me when I hear this. Its a very comforting song and your voice (singing and poetic) is very nurturing.

It fits "perfect" with the introduction of a new life (new day/sunrise). The "son" rising being perfect (perfect being?). A child being the perfection of humanity (I could go on like this all day).

I feel like Im rambling now, but you get my point. I love it.

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ooohhh - &mdash 03/27/07 - 08:21:55 AM
beautifully done - congratulations and thank you for sharing

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Cool &mdash 03/27/07 - 03:12:22 PM
Rhythms and voices intertwine beautifully. Thanks for sharing.

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lovely. &mdash 03/27/07 - 03:44:03 PM
brilliant and evocative. the vox sound much better when they're clean and up front, rather than submerged and effects-heavy, tho.

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The eternal day &mdash 03/27/07 - 06:35:05 PM
I dig the lyrics, the endless cycle of life and transmigration of souls across the time and universe, nice beats and bass as well as a great voice!

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Let Us Proceed With The First Song &mdash 03/27/07 - 06:38:34 PM
Is that the Captain of the Starship Enterprise saying that?? :O)

Nice song. I don't usually like D&B but this track is very gentle; lovely. Your voice is lovely and the production on it is gorgeous.

Perfect!

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it really is... &mdash 03/27/07 - 07:59:52 PM
a beautifully sung song. it captures the serene bueaty of an incredible sunrise. well done!

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Ah, yes! &mdash 03/28/07 - 05:05:55 AM
Those Mullum sunrises! Jojo, I haven't listened to your stuff before, but Neil put this up in chat so why not?! Greetings from the other end of the state!
Really interesting stuff you're doing here - I'm very impressed. Excellent backing track by Neil..
A very good collab!!!
Peace,
Neil

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yaaay &mdash 03/28/07 - 05:21:27 AM
so cool to get some feedback from someone just down the road :D

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good morning! &mdash 03/28/07 - 08:12:36 AM
Nice ambient tune, great voice!

. - Harold

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I like it &mdash 03/28/07 - 01:48:48 PM
I really like the spirituality in this - right up my alley. But I'm not too fond of the male vocal clips because their soundbite quality makes the song sound a little ironic/mocking? I don't know what it is, or "trendy" I don't know, and I think you intended it to be ernestly connected. They do sound cool on first impression, but then I just kept wondering what their purpose was, you know?

Your voice does sound beautiful and the rest of the soundscape is gorgeous. I like the rapid drumming and the natural wonder to it. I really like it, so I hope you don't mind the little critique : ) I"m off to listen to your other songs...

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male vocal clip &mdash 03/28/07 - 03:42:13 PM
the male vocal clip "let us proceed with the first song" was in the music when i received it and was the inspiration for the chorus which i hadn't written at the time. The main part of the song was written as a description of a sunrise and the chorus came after!

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Motion &mdash 03/28/07 - 05:09:48 PM
Idealisms in progress. Excellent start to the day!

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Beautiful, Perfect..... &mdash 03/28/07 - 06:57:01 PM
Thank You :)

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hay &mdash 03/29/07 - 09:30:39 AM
this the best song ever , i love it

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you are &mdash 03/30/07 - 04:35:18 PM
love!

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Lushness Galore &mdash 03/29/07 - 10:12:14 PM
What a huge sound and imaginative production and you have an absolutely lovely voice. The backing track is terrific, too, especially the beats. It develops into something much grander than the opening would suggest, which is kind of nice considering the subject matter.

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thankyou &mdash 03/29/07 - 10:21:43 PM
I think your voice is lovely too...am happy you stopped by for a listen!

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.... :O &mdash 03/30/07 - 03:42:31 PM
Wow Beautiful..so different I LOVE THAT !! What a welcomingen for the newborn.. Evelyn: ) & Her Parents ! I wondered for a while if Neil (father) is Jiguma as he seems to have been awake every nite this week .. (?!) but I guess it's a friend of Yours ?
This is definately a blast ! I must lissen more to You : ) ThankYou Joanna

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father &mdash 03/30/07 - 04:33:52 PM
is neil/doddster an artist here on macjams a cyber friend of mine I have done several collabs with check "rain" and "On My Mountain" for the other collabs I have done with him!
thx for your comments they are much apppreciated.

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Thx Again ! &mdash 04/02/07 - 06:42:12 AM
Neil is JIGUMA from Australia : ) He is one of my Top Favorite Mjrs GREAT STUFF Hope You'll check him out ! Quite different . ***WANNADO*** is the one with Neil/Jiguma I still might love the Most ; )

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neil &mdash 04/02/07 - 08:07:58 PM
not jiguma...from oz
But doddster from UK



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love your voice as ever &mdash 03/30/07 - 07:13:56 PM
What a great vox... Love the lyrics too.. Nice job jo... :)

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Perfect... &mdash 03/31/07 - 06:57:03 PM
...in every way!

Yeeeeep!

Thanks for sharng the rise of the sun, and daughter, too...

Macca

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just perfect &mdash 04/01/07 - 04:12:19 PM
teaks was here

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Whoa! &mdash 04/02/07 - 02:27:36 AM
Way cool this...no...I retract that...this tune is itself perfect! Love your inspiring reading over that hypnotic soundscape. And is that Sri Krishna in the picture? (I love the Bhagavad-Gita. Chapters 11 & 18 are among the finest spiritual literature ever penned.) Yes, a beautiful song for a beautiful day!

Be well!

http://www.macjams.com/song/30366

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Got me &mdash 04/02/07 - 08:32:08 PM
new fan
pulled me in
held me
love the vocal recording
just the optimisim i need
you just hit my inperation button
gotta go play
i hope that words come with the feelings you left me
peace
thanx

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Perfect... &mdash 04/06/07 - 05:26:45 PM
...is such a huge word. The music and lyrics mirror it...perfectly.

Beautifully done.


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i have to admit &mdash 04/06/07 - 05:32:50 PM
I was quite nervous putting out a song called perfect.
but it seemed the most appropriate name for the song!

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hoo rah &mdash 04/08/07 - 02:31:06 AM
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You got me... &mdash 04/12/07 - 02:40:10 AM
Now I've got to listen to the rest of your submissions. Great work.

PS Drove past your place the other week. Stayed at Byron Bay before heading on to Post Macquarie then Sydney!!! It's a small world after all!

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;-) &mdash 09/21/07 - 10:07:45 PM
make me so hypnotic/man...fabuloso...repeat i love your voice!


Im not musician
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extreeeeeeeeemely cool track... &mdash 05/16/08 - 11:14:17 PM
I cannot stress enough just how groovy this track is.


...but it's not drumandbass.

I would very much like to do a drumandbass mashup of it for you, if you'd care to let me take a swing. got wav files of the tracks?

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