The Tomorrow one by handovergold [Email]
Genre: Progressive Rock
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A work in progress...primarily the outro is left to be resolved and some post work. If I had it my way, I'd have a live drummer at my disposal but you get the overall feel of the groove I'm trying to create. Mimi wrote the lyrics, and I (Jeremy) wrote the music and produced it thus far. Any feedback would be helpful as I've been completely undecided on the outro. I want to rock out the final phrase but then perhaps that would be a bit jilting considering the rest of the peace. Then again...Lyrics:
I had to catch my breath that dayYou caught me by surprise that day Your redemption comes But what's the price WE remember you It's our sacrifice Something tells me You were the Tomorrow One I remembered you Remembered you to come It's not that I'm ungrateful today This glass is at least half-full today Your redemption comes But what's the price We remember you It's our sacrifice Something tells me You'd no intention I remembered you Remembered you to come ...and you did--mrecurial you Slippin' like the sand to the ground Carried off by that wave youwere one... (until you were gone) Hardware:
AKG C 3000 B, Event 20/20p's, Ibanez RG series, Genisis 3, Echo Gina 24/96, Art's Tube MP, etc, etc. Software:
Cubase, Waves Gold Bundle, Peak 4.0, EXSP electric Piano, EXS studio drums primarily for tracking. |
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would be a bit jilting considering the rest of the peace."
i think if you suddenly brought in some thick, distorted
Ibanez RG sweetness it could be very awesome. right now
it's very sleepy.
good vocals though - but push them more. i've been
given the same advice... passing it on...
guitar picking sounds lovely
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