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Unkind by michael2 [Email]
Genre: Art Rock

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Hits: 656
Comments: 8
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Last Played: Aug 13, 2008 - 03:17:00 PM
Downloads: 38
Fans: 3
Uploaded: Apr 07, 2007 - 03:33:40 PM
Last Updated: Apr 07, 2007 - 03:33:40 PM



Keywords:
new wave (19)ballad (129)space (125)psych (3)art (32)
Description:
This is a little song that I like to think is reminiscent of Brian Eno, although the wife thinks it sounds more like Depeche Mode. Whatever.

This is my first attempt at recording vocals directly into GB (as opposed to flying them in via Audacity or something else). i had some problems with this high screeching sound showing up on the vocal track. It would go away and then come back, but now it's gone. Hmmm.

Please let me know where i could improve on my mixing skills. I generally don't use that many tracks, so this was harder than I thought it would be. As I type this, I can hear a few spots that could be better mixed, but I'll see what you guys think. If anyone wants to try their hand at mixing this, that would be awesome.

The song is about how my wife was the victim of my insecurities back when we were still just dating and I was a flakey loser who was on tour all the time.

Lyrics:
The sound of your voice is making me crazy
Every choice makes me feel hazey tonight
I'm ready to move, I'm ready to stay here with you
Sometimes it's wierd. sometimes it's fine here
With you

(chorus)
If I try too heard
If I walk away
If I just say no
It makes me unkind, unsure, unlikeable, unkind.

I'm writing a check
I'm paying my bills on time
I need to be strong
I need to be trusted this time
Sometimes it's wierd, sometimes it's fine here with you
I'll spend the night if you think it's right

(chorus)
If I try too heard
If I walk away
If I just say no
It makes me unkind, unsure, unlikeable, unkind.




Hardware:
iMic, intel mini-mac, m-audio 49e midi keyboard

Software:
GB, Eve soft-synth,
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wow &mdash 04/07/07 - 07:53:13 PM
is it me or is that lead vocal too loud at the beginning?

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really nice &mdash 04/08/07 - 02:52:12 PM
great mood. really liked this the hard pan of the vocal throws me off a bit though. more centered. maybe the piano could be more centered or panned 20 degrees. since those are the dominant tracks. just my thought but a really nice song!

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thank you &mdash 04/08/07 - 04:43:44 PM
i was actually thinking the same thing. in GB the vocal looks centered, and i wasn't sitting right in the middle of my monitors while mixing. after hearing it posted, they seemed a little over to the side. i think i need to play with the vocal levels a bit as well. i'm glad you like, thanks for stopping by.

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Dont stop &mdash 04/09/07 - 08:17:36 PM
Listen dont stop makin music and I wont stop destroying it. deal! Ok Ok its just my way of saying you got talent! good song

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Brilliant. &mdash 04/13/07 - 01:41:57 PM
This is a great song as it is, and I would definitely like to take you up on the offer of playing around with it. This would be the first time for me, so I don't really know what the next step is - do I just need the GB file?

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sending &mdash 04/13/07 - 02:15:43 PM
the file to you now. actually i'm uploading it to mediafire (good, clean, no spyware, fast and works for everyone). I'll PM you the link when it's done. I'm so stoked you want to play with it.

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Unkind &mdash 12/11/07 - 10:11:12 PM
Yikes! Only 3 comments? In the famous words of Austin Powers "That's not right." Should be enough comments to overwhelm the site!

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hey &mdash 12/13/07 - 01:03:04 AM
this is a gem
i really enjoyed this very much.
Beatles esque
Really cool overall sound.



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