wound tight

Ron Smith

Genre: Indie Rock

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Loosen Up!

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Lyrics

I can see you from across the room
wainting for you to come unglued
and with your new attitude
isee dreams come tru
so true

You can do what you want to me
i can do what i want to you
we'll share 1 body
it's true, so true

Though your usually wound so tight, there's a certain look in your eyes tonight

dance my love
let the moolight hit your face
set free my love
we'll make a bonfire torch the place
don't you see your're burnin up the room
with your silk smooth skin in lace
break free my love
i'll be the cushion in your fall from grace

Song Stats

Hits: 1020
Comments: 9
Fans: 4
Plays: 97
Downloads: 57
Votes: 5
Uploaded: Apr 16, 2007 - 01:07:01 PM
Last Updated: Apr 12, 2007 - 07:10:18 AM Last Played: Sep 18, 2009 - 08:33:24 AM

Song License

Creative Commons License:
Attribution-NoDerivs-NonCommercial

Song Actions

Hardware:

cheap acoustic, headphones for pickup with standard mac (G5) soundcard, garageband amp simulators

Software:

garageband2

Comments

mvh9591	mvh9591 said 956 days ago (April 16th, 2007)
	Welcome to Macjams Ron --- Nice song and I love the lyrics. I enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing, mvh : ) Check out my latest song called Ease My Troubled Mind

deus ex machina	deus ex machina said 956 days ago (April 16th, 2007)
	cooool Hey, this is very indie man, i love it. Sounds like it could be on college radio and i wouldnt even blink... the only thing id tweak is maybe turn the drum level down like one tiny miniscule level, i got distracted a bit from the giutar and the great sounding vocals. drums keep a nice toe tappin beat tho.. cheeers Check out my latest song called UltraViolet

	said 949 days ago (April 23rd, 2007)
	cool song nice vocals, and the song pace is great. Not bad sound for the rudimentary set-up & noise. Cool song! . - Harold

michael2

michael2 said 946 days ago (April 26th, 2007)

great sound
you got going here. good catch song, the gtr part grabs you in and holds you there; also i think your equipment "limitations" are a huge part of the coolness of this song. love the middle distorted part, with the original gtr part coming back in. put some more songs up, and don't get anymore equipment; sound is perfect the way it is.

Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)

five_extra_arms	five_extra_arms said 946 days ago (April 26th, 2007)
	I'll Be The Cushion... I really like this tune. The bassline and flanged strummy guitar part reminds of my college days. The heavy distorted guitar split the song to pieces. Your vocals are really strong and I agree with michael2 - don't go screwing up your sound with good equipment! I look forward to more from you. Fav'd and DL'd Check out my latest song called Michael Pool

	said 946 days ago (April 27th, 2007)
	nice really good vocal recording..well rounded mix... i dug the muddy electric ..nice

smokey bacon jnr

smokey bacon jnr said 945 days ago (April 27th, 2007)

Chuggin
Great little song - like the slightly quivering sound in your voice - it mixes well with the heavy guitar sound. The lyrics are good too - an often overlooked part of the song. My only criticism,as with your other songs, is that they end a bit abruptly - could do with trailing out a bit more. Add some more bars on the end when exporting the file!! Good work.

Check out my latest song called Hum

Peter Bauckham	Peter Bauckham said 923 days ago (May 19th, 2007)
	Great I love this tune and the lo-fi sound. There's a bit of a early B-52's guitar sound (when they were at their peak). Great stuff - hiss an' all. Peter Check out my latest song called All The Same (CBGB) (Last Chance Challenge)

five_extra_arms	five_extra_arms said 353 days ago (December 9th, 2008)
	Returning To Your First Tune I still love this song when it pops on a shuffle. You have a cool voice and so much style. Bob Check out my latest song called Michael Pool