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Here is my second song, the follow up to Metropolis. This song is more up beat than the last, but the theme is still on the dark side- your partner is out on the town and you're left alone with your computer.
The majority of tracks on here were done with the impOSCar- gated chords, hi hats, bass, arpeggios.
Once again any feedback would be greatly appreciated to help me take this song where it needs to go.
The majority of tracks on here were done with the impOSCar- gated chords, hi hats, bass, arpeggios.
Once again any feedback would be greatly appreciated to help me take this song where it needs to go.
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drakonis
Well, I must be honest and say that I liked your first one better. This on is "OK", but at least to me seems to suffer from a few things. Overall, it seems to just meander, and not have a strong direction or story. The drums seem a little too repetitive throughout, I was waiting for a refrain or something that would break the constant thumping. At about the 1/4 mark in, it sounded like the bass-line was a bar out of place from the melody, the harmonies sounded "wrong" to me for a few bars. I liked the high synth oriental-sounding melody line that shows up in the second half, but maybe that should show up earlier? Do some variations on it through the piece? I do hope these ideas are taken as helpful opinions... feel free to ignore them if they're not where you were intending to go with the piece. And I'd love any reciprocal critiques on any of my stuff if you get a chance (wink). I'm just learning all this stuff too.
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Drakonis