are always good things. I don't know what lyrics you have planned, but I'd advice a careful attitude in writing them to suit such a lovely piece of music.

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will do, thanks.

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r u planning on singing or having someone else sing? That song flows extremely well. (and if ur looking for someone to sing, i know jeff at lighttronics is VERY good so check him out.

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Sounds pro...really, you're getting there! This is more pop than dance-club though. Oh, it just broke into some dnb. nvm. I dunno what to call it. The piano delay works well, the chord progression is catchy, and the fuzzy synth at the end is really nice. The only think I'd suggest is continue to work on the song build. It's more than phrazing, the song should break harder and harder every time. Maybe a few more drum layers would do it.

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nice. it's got a deep, thoughtful mood to it.

some vocals here and there would be nice, but it should not be all filled in with words - i'd let the instrumental mood shine through. just my 2 cents...

thanks

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This sounds great man! You are really kickin it up these days! I see the smoke! Nice chill vibe here man!

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The change in tempo is well done. I'm very curious to see how the lyrics sound in this. Well made.

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I listened to this at least 3 times to decide if i really like it.. it's unanimous.. I do like it! This has a sexy slow dance to it. Some smoldering vocals can really heat it up or conversely give it a cool sentimentality. I was thinking you can add a few more beats or percussion to highlight or dramatize some of its high points, although it does stand very well on its own in its present form...

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I like what you've done here in putting this together Danny. This certainly has the potential to be really cool with the right vocal treatment. I just looked at your bio page and am amazed that you are so young and producing stuff like this. Another amazing young MJer is Einarus - worth a listen. This is a really good place to learn stuff about music and production, and it will be really interesting to watch your music develop over the next year or so.
Good post!
Neil

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thanks neil. einarus is one of my favs. thaks for the commento. the reason the production is solid is cuz i devoted about 4 hours soley to mixing.

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This is more like pop or even hiphop... Nice beatz and piano... Well done

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damn. all i can say is this is amazing. you've out done your self man the beats are amazing. very chill. love it.

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within the first few seconds.

Pianos do that to me. What can I say? :P

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Okay well, now that I've heard the whole thing (after I heard the first few seconds)
I think there are parts where the music could be bigger. It feels a little empty with just the piano and the beat. Not that it sounds bad, mind you, it sounds fantastic, but there are places where adding vocals may not be enough...

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Its a little too mellow and too "well" produced for my taste but it sounds great ! As youve heard im a little grimmyer with my beats and my vocals I keepem raw . But yeah dude this is very well done .Maybe alittle too fast for hip hop though ...here check this out ....http://www.tweakheadz.com/hip_hop_beat_construction.htm

great gear head site .! Also its takin me two and a half years of 1.teaching myself how to operate a computer prior to 2005 I could barely turn one on . Then from there like a autistic idiot savant learning digital recording . spent almost a year drooling and passing out on my laptop.before I even realized I had garageband already on my computer . then diving into learning Gb . Then getting frustrated with the simpleness of GB and then totally relearning Logic , and im still no where near understanding it yet . tho I have a pritty good idea of what im doing its still got tons of capabilities I havent even explored yet . I would suggest getting iDrum http://www.glaresoft.com/ its an alright drum machine for 50 bucks and then the rest is really from your soul . Id love to colab with you if your interested ! Let me know if there are any specifics I can help you with homes

one love through music

Frenchy T

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...slow build. Lots and lots of space to float in. Thanks so much. Really enjoyed this...


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This song is unlike any other song. It has true taste, originality and even a nice piano effect (much like in most of my songs). The fusion of the Tr-808 drums (I might be off), makes this something I would download. I'll keep an eye on your music. I'd love to hear this song with vocals, so continue the good work. If I were to make a suggestion...well... there really isn't much but maybe a reverb on the drums (or not). This song...there's just something about it :). Congrats, this is one of my favs!

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This song, it's something to be proud of. I look for a lot of songs under the dance-club category, and hardly any of them have as much originality and texture as this one. You SHOUD be proud. Stuff like this comes so very rarely. Can't wait to hear some of your other work! I'll keep an eye out for your music and...well...this one is one of my favs. Good job, and I can't wait to hear lyrics on this :). Good work, and once again, you should be proud.

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Sorry for posting the above comment twice. Couldn't find it the first time. Good job on this song!

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