Interesting piece here, but I was first inspired to TURN
DOWN THE VOLUME cuz your EQ is all off and bloated and
distorted. I'd go back and spend some time trying to
equalize cuz your post is seriously overloading. Good
work, keep workin'!

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..but i agree with fosod on production. try turning the
overall volume down with the slider on the lower
right & adjust the volume/eq for the bass tracks. would
really love to hear a cleaner version!

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...definitely needs remixing.

Your use of drums is interesting, although a bit heavy for
my tastes. You have a good ear for various synth sounds
too.

I would like to hear just a bit more variety in your
textures. This song sounds pretty much the same from
beginning to end. Your use of sustained organ gets just a
bit repetitive.

The ending seemed a little sudden.

But you've got some good ideas going here and I look
forward to hearing your future work.

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