I like your melancholic melodies, that sound perfect to me. To my ears it would be worth working on the drums (refinements, variety) and some additional sounds. Nevertheless I like it as it is. Did you think about additional vocals? I'm looking forward to listen to part two and three.

I'm sure, the German Electropop band "Wolfsheim" could appeal to you ...

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This has a very nice melodic feel, the sounds work well together, ethereal and funky. Might sound good with a few vocals or vocal samples thrown in?
Cheers
Steve

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I'd say "Welcome to Macjams", but it looks like you've been here awhile... I like the electronica you posted, and like the fractal artwork too. There's a nice longing slightly dark(wave) edge to this, which catches my attention. The orchestration is pretty good, but feels like it wants just a little more "something" (maybe drop to a more sparsely-instrumented section to give more dynamics through the piece?) And the drums seemed slightly out of place for this piece, I almost wanted to hear more synthy drums or more effected ones, but I'm not sure why the "regular" drumset sounded odd here (again, just my opinion.) Very intriguing first piece, I will watch for more of your pieces!
ttfn,
Drakonis

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This is a really listenable piece of electronica. I like the forward movement and the variation of sounds and pacing. Production is clean and sharp. Thanks for sharing.

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Hi DGO. Some saavy electronica here. I recognize those Korg sounds and some of the sequences. Of course, it's apparent you've got a keen sense for composition and orchestration, but the thing I notice in really good electronica that I like is a sense of transparency -- it's dense, yet uncomplicated. I think that's the case here in the songs I've heard from you. This light-hearted, simple time sig, and 'bubbly' tune reminds me a bit of some indie-artists I know. I like the note bends you use --not overdone and very deliberate. Kudos. Looking forward to more!

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