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This is another version of a song I posted earlier, but with people's comments taken into consideration. The "s" sound has been slightly removed from the vocal track, and the last part doesn't come in with quite as much as a 'bang' as before. More echo's been added too, and the piano doesn't have such a high EQ anymore.
Lyrics:
Somewhere I’m hiding
Hiding my soul
If no-one can see it
Then I’m still in control
The walls they go up
I wish they’d come down
CHORUS
I wanna be an animal
Swimming in the sea, losing control
I wanna be an animal
Flying in the breeze, going where I wanna go
Going where I wanna go
I feel the pressure
To show them your soul
But things I am hiding
Are things that keep me whole
The walls they go up
I wish they’d come down
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Had to come back for this... &mdash 04/23/07 - 09:57:58 PM
I've been away from MacJams for over a year now (not on purpose, I've just been busy!), but I had to come listen when I saw you had a new song posted. :) I love your voice, and the piano sounds great. Good to hear you again. [ Reply to This ]
Born to be a musician &mdash 04/25/07 - 02:10:46 PM
You are a pop-music wiz kid. Your voice is pure and clear, quite a pleasure to listen to. Having said that, you still have room to grow in your singing and develop a more mature style over time. Your instrumental play is clean, crisp and innovative as always.
Also, in most of your (previous) songs, your voice is a little bit too upfront and overwhelms the music, though quite a bit less and much better on this song.
I noticed you changed the lyrics to "walls come up...wished they'd go down." The original lyrics posted on this page (go up...come down) is more correct in terms of meaning.
Hope to hear more of your music. [ Reply to This ]
Nice clean sound anton, &mdash 04/28/07 - 10:11:08 PM
Very cool sound, drifted away nicely on this one, excellent key,lyrics, and keys, nicely done. [ Reply to This ]
You are a man after my own musical heart ..... &mdash 04/29/07 - 12:12:01 AM
... I like this - mostly because I hear a parallel in the lyrics which mirror a lot of the type of words that I write myself .. heh heh .... your voice is crisp and clear .... I don't think it's too up front at all (only those with the best voices can pull that off anyway) ... so let it shine and showcase it ! [ Reply to This ]
ye &mdash 04/29/07 - 02:34:09 PM
great voice you have... Nice song... The piano playing is good too... [ Reply to This ]
This is great! &mdash 05/07/07 - 01:09:00 PM
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