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| fosod said 1928 days ago (August 14th, 2004) | |
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Ya Know P.S. I just read the word "underwhelming" the other day at work and I really wanted to use it. I meant to say that the tracks are not at the right levels relative to each other. Good work though. --- Kind regards, Fosod -- Fosod Design Studios www.fosod.com Check out my latest song called Totally Hoany
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| regulus said 1928 days ago (August 15th, 2004) | |
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Ya Know I feel where i have errored here, again, is in placing this in the incorrect catagory (Games/Soundtracks is more fitting) and having delited the additional synopsis delineating that this was created for use to a soundtrack for an under 5 min. film contest. This there by (above), was the intellectual discription to the underlieing theme for the porduction. I do like to rant though. For anyones passion to be creative. This is also the second porduction using GarageBand and EVERYTHING is just pratice to a real artist. There are only fleeting moments of tranciant satisfaction to any of my works. As, there is always the next, the better one to be made. --- ++ Desiderata ++ Check out my latest song called Won:23
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| Cameron said 1928 days ago (August 15th, 2004) | |
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good use of loops You put together these loops pretty well, because you kept them at a minimum. This prevented the track from being overloaded with too many different ones. There was a consistent feel throughout the track. I agree with fosod that the production values need to be worked on a bit. There was some distortion. Good possibilities here though. Check out my latest song called EPONYM
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| regulus said 1928 days ago (August 15th, 2004) | |
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good use of loops Thank you Cameron for taking the time for comment. I wish, now, that i had left the pertinent information disscribing the piece, in lue of just the articulation to the discription of the action the piece is used for. In reviewing the piece again for production quality there was a level behind the waw-waw, which i sang through some effects, where the abbrasiveness was deturent, but necessary to have at a lower level. This is what i can feel (hear) may be to what mr. underwelmed may have been refering to. That and an observation described below. I think the distortion you are refering to,...(near and up to the end) was the etheric, phazed+waw-waw, voices flying over the current of the music. If it can be called that. Let's say the instrumentation. Thanks again amigo for your time to comment. --- ++ Desiderata ++ Check out my latest song called Won:23
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fosod
There are written exposition communities for pseudo-
philosophical ranting? Just teasin' you. Pretty good
arrangement of the loops... but I don't know what
happened at export but the production level is really off.
Very underwhelming. Maybe it was just the individual
levels you assigned to the instruments. I'd take another
look at it... if this is practice, you practice pretty well: keep
at it.