There are written exposition communities for pseudo-
philosophical ranting? Just teasin' you. Pretty good
arrangement of the loops... but I don't know what
happened at export but the production level is really off.
Very underwhelming. Maybe it was just the individual
levels you assigned to the instruments. I'd take another
look at it... if this is practice, you practice pretty well: keep
at it.

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P.S. I just read the word "underwhelming" the other day at work and I really
wanted to use it. I meant to say that the tracks are not at the right levels
relative to each other. Good work though.

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I feel where i have errored here, again, is in placing this in the incorrect
catagory (Games/Soundtracks is more fitting) and having delited the
additional synopsis delineating that this was created for use to a soundtrack
for an under 5 min. film contest. This there by (above), was the intellectual
discription to the underlieing theme for the porduction. I do like to rant
though. For anyones passion to be creative.

This is also the second porduction using GarageBand and EVERYTHING is just
pratice to a real artist. There are only fleeting moments of tranciant
satisfaction to any of my works. As, there is always the next, the better one
to be made.

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You put together these loops pretty well, because you
kept them at a minimum. This prevented the track from
being overloaded with too many different ones. There was
a consistent feel throughout the track.

I agree with fosod that the production values need to be
worked on a bit. There was some distortion. Good
possibilities here though.

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Thank you Cameron for taking the time for comment. I wish, now, that i had
left the pertinent information disscribing the piece, in lue of just the
articulation to the discription of the action the piece is used for.

In reviewing the piece again for production quality there was a level behind
the waw-waw, which i sang through some effects, where the abbrasiveness
was deturent, but necessary to have at a lower level. This is what i can feel
(hear) may be to what mr. underwelmed may have been refering to. That and
an observation described below.

I think the distortion you are refering to,...(near and up to the end) was the
etheric, phazed+waw-waw, voices flying over the current of the music. If it
can be called that. Let's say the instrumentation. Thanks again amigo for
your time to comment.

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