So is this about the naked dude in Manhattan? Good idea,
but take a look at your output levels. Sounds really
overloaded. You're clipping.

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You've got a pretty good beat going but it might be better
if it were a bit less bottom-heavy. The synths on top are
somewhat buried, especially the higher frequencies.

This would be a nice accompaniment to some sort of solo
instrument on top. This sounds like it's missing
something, like a melody. This decent chord progression
deserves one.

I really wish that there was something in this tune to reach
out and GRAB me!

The ending was a bit sudden.

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