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| michael2 said 931 days ago (May 9th, 2007) | |
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i personally like the disaffected vocals. it almost sounds like a ramones song to me, or johnny thunders. i guess it's the 60's girl group vibe. great chorus. at the end do you say "let's all stare into the sun" ? i hope so. do you remember that old dana carvey skit: "in my day we didn't have movies; you wanted to see something, you stared at the sun." all the fake endings were pretty cool too. Check out my latest song called Behind Enemy Lines (w/Bud and Particle Dots)
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| mccannmp1 said 883 days ago (June 26th, 2007) | |
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thanks thanks Mike for the comment...appreciate it...and yes you were correct about the lyrics and yes I do remember that skit with Dana Carvey Check out my latest song called Push and Shove
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| bud said 785 days ago (October 2nd, 2007) | |
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Nice job - short pop songs are an admirable goal - I'm into it myself lately. Check out Sally. I hear a little Michael Stipe in the chorus. Check out my latest song called try not to think
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Godchaser
I like the feel but lead vocal needs reworked-lacks emotion & conviction-is it realllly sunnnnnyyy?sell it!
think length is fine,short and sweet-a fine beginning that can be improved greatly with a little touch up here and there.
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