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A work in progress with my friend George Gostovich. Trying to write a good pop song...like They Might Be Giants ...I guess there should be a bridge but I kind of like it short and sweet too.
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Catchy &mdash 05/09/07 - 12:19:29 AM
I like the feel but lead vocal needs reworked-lacks emotion & conviction-is it realllly sunnnnnyyy?sell it!
think length is fine,short and sweet-a fine beginning that can be improved greatly with a little touch up here and there.
=Godchaser [ Reply to This ]
i personally &mdash 05/09/07 - 11:03:52 PM
like the disaffected vocals. it almost sounds like a ramones song to me, or johnny thunders. i guess it's the 60's girl group vibe. great chorus. at the end do you say "let's all stare into the sun" ? i hope so. do you remember that old dana carvey skit: "in my day we didn't have movies; you wanted to see something, you stared at the sun."
all the fake endings were pretty cool too. [ Reply to This ]
thanks &mdash 06/26/07 - 07:56:20 PM
thanks Mike for the comment...appreciate it...and yes you were correct about the lyrics and yes I do remember that skit with Dana Carvey [ Reply to This ]
Nice job - &mdash 10/02/07 - 05:30:10 PM
short pop songs are an admirable goal - I'm into it myself lately. Check out Sally. I hear a little Michael Stipe in the chorus. [ Reply to This ]
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think length is fine,short and sweet-a fine beginning that can be improved greatly with a little touch up here and there.
=Godchaser
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