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| 7732 said 930 days ago (May 11th, 2007) | |
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Thank you!!! Justbase, my MAHN!!!!! Thanks so much for the comment you have no idea how much I appreciate what I can take in. I'm still learning and always growing, just trying to take in as much as I can. It's amazing what you mentioned because when I re-hear I can see exactly what you are talking about. This beat needs Mastering, a lot of it...hahahah...It will do for now, but just wanted to take a min and say thanks for the very useful comment, looking forward to your new track or remix, loved the one you did with Busta...PEACE! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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| spitlogic said 929 days ago (May 12th, 2007) | |
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Im loving it Nice organ (?). There could be some bass added to this in my opinion, but Im just a big fan of bass. Those drums are carrying well too. Is that your voice I hear with the beat or is that another synth? Check out my latest song called Guillotine
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| 7732 said 928 days ago (May 12th, 2007) | |
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Thanks Spit! Whud up Spit!!!!!!!! Thanks for commenting my man!!! I was just messing around trying to come up with some different sounds, and I made those sounds in the background myself. I tried to make it sound dirty not so spot on, and I think it gives it some nice flavor...Needs a little mastering, but overall I think it came out alright...I'll have to mess around with the bass, you are 100% correct, it does need some bass, good commenting!!!! If you come across the time, and wanna spit on this track, it's all yours! Thanks Spit, Peace! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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| craft said 924 days ago (May 16th, 2007) | |
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timbaland beat this track just need some changes here and there... A chorus will help it a lot... And an emcee... Dope sh*t!! Check out my latest song called Blue Lights (feat. Spleenveil)
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| 7732 said 923 days ago (May 17th, 2007) | |
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Thank you! Thanks man! Truly appreciate the comment, I'm working with some local artist's right now to get a Dope MC on this beat. The chorus I've messed around with, and soometime's it gets cloudy, but that just maybe the wrong instrument I've used...Thanks again for the comment, much appreciated! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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| guitapick said 923 days ago (May 17th, 2007) | |
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For some reason... ...I can imagine an ethereal to funk to heavy guitar in there.... ...ok...maybe some synth washes, too.... Check out my latest song called Outside the Corral
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| guitapick said 923 days ago (May 17th, 2007) | |
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Forgot to mention... ...I really like the groove. A lot. Check out my latest song called Outside the Corral
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| 7732 said 922 days ago (May 18th, 2007) | |
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Thanks so much! You are more than welcome to take the beat and add the synth washes or some funk to this as you please, totally open to collab, you are incredibly talented and I'm sure whatever you do will be ABSOLUTELY FIRE!!!! Just let me know and I can send the files your way...Thanks so much for your comment, very much appreciated! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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| fourtywatt said 906 days ago (June 3rd, 2007) | |
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good beats left a note with ya. don't know how those work or if you got it. i agree that mixing the beats a little better and a bass line would be a great start to this tune. then add some interludes or corus later to break up the main beat. i synced "hip hop gems beat 1" to your song. it doesn't sound bad. if you listened to it, i think it could give you an idea what would sound good. i could either email it to you or post it if you'd like me to just so you could hear it. i added it a little strong so it can be heard ok on small speakers, cus i don't have headphones to mix things well right now. Check out my latest song called lil' nate (doin' lil jon)
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| five_extra_arms said 904 days ago (June 5th, 2007) | |
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Wicked Beat Dude, I was in a trance after about 2 minutes of this. Love it! I agree this is a great bed of beats and subtle sounds for something to happen on top of it. Vocals or guitars or something would take it to another level, but it's really tough as it is right now. I have to check out your other stuff. Thanks man. Check out my latest song called Michael Pool
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| 7732 said 898 days ago (June 12th, 2007) | |
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Thanks! Thanks for the comment my man! Means a lot, I'm workin' on some new stuff, trying to get some new sounds in there! Anyhow, more stuff to come soon! Thanks for the comment! Peace! Check out my latest song called R.I.P Instrumental
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kind of timbalandish. u need a singer for this one, and find out where to take all the elements of the music it self. i like the beatboxing!!
Ok, criticism, here goes: mix the instruments out better, too much emphasis is placed on the bassdrum and clap.
The beatboxing could have been used as a centre piece or a birdge of the tune. The hihats could have continued where the beats drops out after bar 3. But man, take it for what it is worth:-)
Dope track! Effexor this one to smithereens for an experiment!