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| Adisson10 said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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Hey Thanks for the critique Ide say its pretty acurate. I just started playing acouple years ago and I just got Garageband a month or two ago. I've since added some parts and but have yet to record it. Thanks again Check out my latest song called Lost
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| SlimGirlFat said 1928 days ago (August 16th, 2004) | |
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As Pooey commented, this was a rather tentative start that needs some work. what effects did you use, its a little too echoey for my taste and a lot of hiss. it doesnt gel together properly, as a track at the moment, keep at it some more! SlimGirlFat Check out my latest song called Not Enough
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| Adisson10 said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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As Your absolutly right. I actualy just found this sight yesterday and im at work I was pretty anxios to try it out, that track was one I happened to have with me. I really dig your songs everything I herd is pretty tight how long have you been doing this? Check out my latest song called Lost
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| breezer said 1928 days ago (August 16th, 2004) | |
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I like part of it! Then it seems you lose all control. Check out my latest song called Leapfrog
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| Adisson10 said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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I like part of it! Thanks man Im glad you liked part of it, I'de say I diffenitly got carried away. this is all new to me, but thanks I hav'nt herd your stuff yet I'll check some out today. Check out my latest song called Lost
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| packosmokes said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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Won't repeat everyone but I do agree. However, it's a very tasty flavor you've created. There's a darkness floating around in there, would fit very well on the Heat soundtrack. Perhaps, some strings and deep synths to grow the song? And probably take out that second part or find a way to bring the two flavors together. Kewl stuff as I know you were eager to post, heh! Check out my latest song called With You
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| Adisson10 said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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Won't repeat everyone Thanks man. Soon I think I'll re-record that and post it again Check out my latest song called Lost
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| tyw said 1927 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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Sounds I like where you're heading with this. I thought the early guitar parts sounded a bit like a Pink Floyd track. Keep on creating! Check out my latest song called Dime
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| Kevensor said 1793 days ago (December 29th, 2004) | |
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link it up i think it definitely has a Pink Floyd feel to it. I would try some thing like the single hi hat loop in garage band to add some sort of secondary beat to it to link it together. Although I think it is good, it sounds a little disjointed and the hi hat might give it some kind of continuity. just a thought. Check out my latest song called Smoove
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pooey
You've got a cool sound on the guitar during the
strumming part. But the "song" as a whole contains what
seems to me as a great deal of uncertainty. Take a couple
of elements from this track and build on them.