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Breakup comfort tune--icecream without the calories.
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| jesilah said 1924 days ago (August 18th, 2004) | |
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almost there!!! Thanks for the comments, Stan. R'oh, I know the guitar's too much, but damn it, I wanted to rock! ;) --- jess Check out my latest song called Bitter People
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| regulus said 1926 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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Oh, what to say--- i love u :) Really nice feal with your projection, emotioinal and passionate. Nice counter with the back up voice. I could feal a little more bravo in the bass but thats just me. I felt a little slip, but i didn't fall, on drum tempo right after the bridge. i gather by the array listed you have been doing music for a while or you own a music store. You have quality it shows. What I'm not hearing though is clearity of the words. I'm a little hard of hear with so many years in earphones and heavy music. That and beating steel with hammers in making suits of armor. so it could be me. I beleive enuciation inhances eloquence. They go toghther. I know it's a long way and a slender line to streach through, but i have a shoulder if you need. You get a high rating from me... want to hear more pant, pant.......soon Check out my latest song called Won:23
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| jesilah said 1924 days ago (August 18th, 2004) | |
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Oh, what to say--- i love u :) Thanks for the love :) This is such a fantastic site--ya make a girl feel great to be so well received. In fact I don't own a music store (what a heaven that would be); I just tend to be a sucker for the gear. While GarageBand seems to have all the effects, dynamics, and soft-instruments a creative mind could ever need, I like having outboard alternatives, too--especially the vintage or tube stuff that just can't be duplicated. --- jess Check out my latest song called Bitter People
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| packosmokes said 1926 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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Well done This is a good track, generated by unfortunate events it would seem... I have a few of those myself. Nice guitar solo and solid arrangement. You've got a cool voice, too, but it seems like those "s" sounds come in really strong at times. Maybe dropping some of those higher dials in the EQ might help there. Of course, I'm still a mixing novice. Check out my latest song called With You
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| jesilah said 1924 days ago (August 18th, 2004) | |
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Well done Thanks for the listen, Packo ;) I'm open to suggestions about how to drop the suffer-and-succotash that's all over my vocals. On the one hand, I want to get that "on-stage" feel of a closely-held SM58; but the production value of it ends up sounding pretty amateur. Maybe a de-esser? --- jess Check out my latest song called Bitter People
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| Cameron said 1926 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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good beat The vocals are well done (nice voice! great quality!) and the breathing was good in small doses. But it might be better overall to use that effect sparingly. I liked everything about the accompaniment except that it seemed just a bit heavy to my ears at times, but otherwise very good. Nice beat, tasteful guitar punctuation. Good track all in all. Check out my latest song called EPONYM
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| jesilah said 1924 days ago (August 18th, 2004) | |
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good beat Ya know, I have this problem all the time--mixing _way_ to heavy on the bass. I think it has something to do with my monitors, Event 20/20bas. They've got 8" woofers that really punch the low stuff, so, rather than make sensible mixing choices, I'm inclined to crank it and indulge the thump. I just can't resist! Of course, then I play the songs on stereos or in the car, and the bass is just waaaaaayy too big. Reaw . . . reaw . . . reeaaaaaaaaawwwwww. But now that this has happenned over and over again, I think one of these days I'll learn my lesson. Thanks for the comments ;) --- jess Check out my latest song called Bitter People
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| macapa said 1926 days ago (August 17th, 2004) | |
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Pleasant This song is a pleasure to listen to. Things sound a little muddled to me, but maybe it's only me. Reminds me a bit of something from the 80's, but I can't put my finger on it. |
| Suzanne said 1910 days ago (September 2nd, 2004) | |
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breath i especially like the groove and your breathing. had a hard time catching the lyrics. but this is cool tune and deserve some cool song art! nice key change into the hot solo, by the way. drums were a but too soft, and the bass also sometimes (during the guitar solo). love the track. Check out my latest song called Rock The Baby With Voodoo (w/Tobin)
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Stun Nutz
I like the mood and melody of your tune...it reminds
me of Blondie or the Motels...
I think it could be a great song with a just a little
work...the vocals and music are a little bit tenative
and the guitar solo a little too much. Watch that
breathy inhale on the singing - it sticks out in some
areas.