I'm not sure about the effected snare that comes in shortly after the song introduces the drums and guitar. Really enjoyed the initial percussion groove though. The cowbell added a nice latin syncopation to the tune.

I feel like you need to add some variety to the first two thirds of the tune. The break down in the last third was a good thing. Do another break similar to it earlier on, perhaps.

Keep going on this one, it's a good start.
-g

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