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Beautiful Machine v3 [TENSE]


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chikoppi

 Genre: Industrial

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This is a remix of Packosmokes "Beautiful Machine." The song remains the same, but we've been experimenting (read: fighting) with GB to try and achieve better masters. Be critical, be kind, be good enough to leave any tips you might have!
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Lyrics


Got the disease, initiate the remedy

Built up as a trap, seeking out my immunity

Pulsing with the sin from within, they injected me

Seething with the strain and the pain, I'm in agony



Picking up all of the fall and the tragedy

Have to replace every trace of what isn't me

Compassion never found any ground for the likes of me

Got the disease, initiate the remedy



Feeling all the hate, this is not what I want to be

Now, I realize I'm my own worst enemy

No one is to blame for the shame, I'm not what I seem

Goth the disease, initiate the remedy



Seething with the strain and the pain, I'm in agony

Pulsing with the sin from within, they injected me

Built up as a trap, seeking out my immunity

Got the disease, initiate the remedy



Welcome to my world

Step inside my dream

Create my fantasy

Beautiful Machine

I want so much more

Kill my reality

Give me what I need
Song Stats
Hits: 7087
Comments: 22
Fans: 12
Plays: 865
Downloads: 259
Votes: 32
Uploaded: Aug 17, 2004 - 06:36:03 AM
Last Updated: Aug 17, 2004 - 03:10:57 AM Last Played: Mar 16, 2017 - 12:22:23 AM
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Hardware:
Shure m58, ART Tube MP, M-Audio Keystation 49e, Line 6 Spider AMP, Ibanez RG-470L
Software:
GB 1.1
Comments
penguinsocks said 4697 days ago (August 17th, 2004)
packo's girlfriend's vocals
they sound a little odd... maybe they need to be a little
more similar to the quality of packo's... when she's solo.

otherwise, great mix, very smooth and professional.
awesome vocals.

previous version, people: http://www.macjams.com/
song/song_profile.php?lid=2491
comparatively this new version has a lot more BANG!
actually Scarlette's vocals have that same different quality
in the original too. it almost has too much presence.

little typo in your lyrics btw.. 3rd stanza.
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penguinsocks said 4697 days ago (August 17th, 2004)
p.s.
who the hell gave you a 6 for production?!
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said 4697 days ago (August 17th, 2004)
Zap my temples!
Man, I love it when the Van de Graf generator lights up in
stereo and ignites my temples. Up to that point, the sound
was mostly center stage. What a trip! Sounds especially
good on my Sennheiser earphones. Good job, crew. Keep
the fantasy alive!
_nderscore said 4696 days ago (August 18th, 2004)
..& i thot v2 was great
really polished things up chiko. the changes are subtle
but still definitive-nice work! ..on a side note-i've been
having trouble getting some of your tunes to stream even
tho they show as 'active'
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Cameron said 4696 days ago (August 18th, 2004)
improved
The mix seems better balanced now (not that it was at all
bad before...). More polished and professional.

I really like all the little hooks popping in and out, spices
things up nicely. Great driving beat, but not overbearing.

The vocals are generally very good, but as pengy pointed
out, the quality of SCARLETT's voice is quite different
when she's solo.

Truly excellent job overall. Pretty much radio ready.
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Ringo said 4696 days ago (August 18th, 2004)
Aural Excitement
Jehosaphat chik dude, you really can squeeze a lot out of
your rig.. You have got some good raw material with a
track like this but it's impressive what you have done to it.

All hail to the remix king.
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bloosman1 said 4695 days ago (August 19th, 2004)
!
So awsome! Hints of 'Berlin' (old school) as well as
tragically new!! I love this!
---Jerome
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ka-klick said 4694 days ago (August 19th, 2004)
Welcome to the
First church of apliantology, the white zone is for loading
and unloading only...

Yeah bayyybeee. I loved it before, and it's even more
polished.
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said 4693 days ago (August 20th, 2004)
Great production
I like the mix. It's amazing that you did it all in
Garageband. The lyrics are really good as is the guitar.
Actually, the guitar is awesome! And I love the girl's
vocals too.
Moodee said 4693 days ago (August 21st, 2004)
Great Indus base, cleaner mix
Already commented previous version.
as Ka-Klick says this one is "more polished"
It serves well this song which I appreciate
a lot for its originality.
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TobinMueller said 4691 days ago (August 23rd, 2004)
Excellent
Excellent production, CD ready. Great sound. Absolutely
consistent concept, integrated arrangement and lyrics.
Great. (Female vocals in a different dimension makes
perfect sense to me in this piece, adds to the story line. I
imagined she was the fantasy... The blending of the
machine metaphor with the reality of the machine
production is what makes this so brilliant!) Perfect
production (even tho the constant bass drum drives me
crazy... which is the point, I suspect).
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Normal said 4677 days ago (September 6th, 2004)
Heyo...
It sounds a lot better. Though when I was listening to it at
a rather high volume, the guitars were starting to grate
my nerves a little. Otherwise, it's great.
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Iseae said 4651 days ago (October 2nd, 2004)
Reznor any one?
This for some reason it makes me think of what the
product would be if NIN and KMFD could procreate. I
would have gone for a rinkey tinkey sequencey bit over
the guitar, but that's my taste for you. I really liked it,
thought it got off to a bit of a slow start but once
everything got going it was a masterpiece (couldn't think
of a better word I've been face first in a computer all day)
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antwan said 4621 days ago (November 1st, 2004)
Scarlettes vocals
She has a nice tone .
But I think a more soulful approach would suit this track, almost a KMFDM style would rock it.

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Pie said 4571 days ago (December 21st, 2004)
Rockin'
It's a builder alright - but when it gets there it kicks.
Great vocal. Music to kill to :-)
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Peter Greenstone said 4547 days ago (January 14th, 2005)
Cool tune
Great powerful sound. Love the vocals. Sounds like
maybe the mp3 is a little over compressed as I could hear
some compression artifacting on the high end, particularly
on the female vocals.
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TennesseeVic said 4475 days ago (March 27th, 2005)
Nicely aggressive
The song as such I can take or leave, but I'm very
impressed by the production of this track. Alternating
dense and sparse passages, distorted and clean sounds,
creative panning; this is seriously good stuff. 7-9-8-8
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Swanny said 4399 days ago (June 11th, 2005)
Wicked Good !
SWEEEEEEEET !
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said 4331 days ago (August 18th, 2005)
The test
This is still one of my favorite MacJams. It passes the test
of time. Ignites my temples!
screamalexz said 4238 days ago (November 19th, 2005)
nice
very NIN beat, like the vocals. kind of a grungy, metal style of vocal style that sounds cool. i like how the female vocals fit in, they give a nice contrast to the make vocals.
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Char said 2090 days ago (October 6th, 2011)
I'm
learning about industrial from your stuff. It sure has a commanding presence. Love the beat. Thanks.
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davisamerica said 1538 days ago (April 11th, 2013)
ha!
... totally excellent. downloaded.
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Industrial music is a loose term for a number of different styles of electronic and experimental music. First used in the mid 1970s to describe the then-unique sound of Industrial Records artists, a wide variety of artists and labels have since come

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