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Pop song primarily with piano
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| thetiler said 901 days ago (June 5th, 2007) | |
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Like the flow of this LIke how it gets interesting towards the halfway mark. Lots of cool sounds and progressions! Check out my latest song called The Bluebird Cafe (with two other guest)
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| drakonis said 901 days ago (June 5th, 2007) | |
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good building blocks There are some really nice ideas in here, the main chord progression (and its minor-mode sibling) are very nice. The intro needs a little more build on each phrase, it seemed to be one identical phrase too long. And it is hard to tell, without a main melody line sung/played over this how the overall piece will work... without it this seems a little dry of course. You may want to add an additional instrument in the chorus/refrain that is not in the other parts, to spice it up a little. The drum loops add to the repetitiveness, possibly add more fill-tweaks to break it up. And the ending just trails off, so working on the ending a little would be good too. Those are the critiques, but overall, a nice foundation for a pop tune. Hope these are helpful observations! ttfn, Drakonis Check out my latest song called Lullaby for the Inner Child
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