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Pop (446), rock (1078), alternative (217), piano (595), macjams (104)
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Description:
Pop song primarily with piano
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Nice work! &mdash 06/04/07 - 04:53:32 PM
jumpin &mdash 06/04/07 - 07:31:37 PM
HEy! &mdash 06/04/07 - 08:02:23 PM
full round &mdash 06/04/07 - 08:10:23 PM
Starts out thin but then the bass licks in. Chord progressions a little bit repetitive. Overlay more variation and polyphony to reduce sameness. Work on dynamics and some tempo changeups or retards. This is an excellent foundation. Try to achieve more organic synth voicings for your piano. Get some singing woven in. [ Reply to This ]
Like the flow of this &mdash 06/05/07 - 11:49:03 AM
LIke how it gets interesting towards the halfway mark.
Lots of cool sounds and progressions! [ Reply to This ]
good building blocks &mdash 06/05/07 - 12:02:30 PM
There are some really nice ideas in here, the main chord progression (and its minor-mode sibling) are very nice. The intro needs a little more build on each phrase, it seemed to be one identical phrase too long. And it is hard to tell, without a main melody line sung/played over this how the overall piece will work... without it this seems a little dry of course. You may want to add an additional instrument in the chorus/refrain that is not in the other parts, to spice it up a little. The drum loops add to the repetitiveness, possibly add more fill-tweaks to break it up. And the ending just trails off, so working on the ending a little would be good too. Those are the critiques, but overall, a nice foundation for a pop tune. Hope these are helpful observations!
ttfn,
Drakonis [ Reply to This ]
Catchy &mdash 06/05/07 - 04:58:41 PM
Has a nice catchy progression to it. A lot of good changes, some great builds and then if finds it's way back to the theme. Thanks for sharing.
John [ Reply to This ]
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