another enjoyable one. It's R&B be alright, most of it
right on good feeling. nice porduction. your vocal on the
mic is better than the first ones. I would like to hear one
with the back up vocal up front. and the voice on this one
for harmony. Your back up was running more scales and
has a different emotion. You hit a couple of real tight
harmonious parts there. smooooth. On this one the front
voice got a little nazzle and the i felt on the key word
heart might have been pornounced HEArT as if it were
coming from Boston or England. In a song so soft and
blue the R was a little hard.

On that field, it is for U, isn't it?? i love your porjection,
you've captured a little more heaRt. You know you hava a
fan. chao

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Very good new R&B groove. Unique and moody and well done. Good performance too. Nice lyrics, altho perhaps my "poor" heart is just a bit too self-pitying; and sometimes there are too many words. Some of of internal rhymes are cool, but sound too self-aware and make the honesty of the song less compelling. Maybe more anger? More about the effect this has on you? This is a good track and is just missing something lyrically to make it have full impact... I enjoyed your performance and total deisgn very much.

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Like it overall but agree with the the thoughts of the others.

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The intro is nice. You have a really nice voice. I can kind of feel your energy when you sing. Your harmony is off the hook. I really like what you're doing. It's kind of like a mixture between r&b and pop. But never the less it's still hot. Keep doing it girl.

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