on and off piano type sound and the drumming.

Cool rocking interplay!

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I really like this. It is well written and sounds pretty damn good. Very cool guitar parts. Technically I think this sounds fine without vocals, but a good lyrical presentation would definitely enhance it. Do you have any ideas for lyrics? Are you planning to add vocals yourself, or do you want a collaborator?

At the moment I'm frustrated with my own musical projects, but if you don't have vocals in 30 days hit me up and I'll see what I can come up with. I really like this song and would love to participate but can't commit yet.

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so ill hit u up soon thnx man

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What a production. So much going on. Thus stands by itself but lyrics will make this even better. Great song!

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like the post treatment on the guitars, stuttering .. cool. Nice balance with the keys, twinges of The Doors in the keys and some U2 in the bass line and leads. Groovin' an' rockin' - nice space and progressions for singing over - hope you get a singer for this one.

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its a very col song ...it need a vocal
ye I agree ...and sure would be nice
to hear a leatal lead guitar ....!!
well done ...cool keyboards indeed
realy enjoyed !!


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gimme a couple of days, and i will send you an advance copy....
Allen Dean, the r.A.d. Project

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this has some real kickin potential
love the "feel" you create here, sir.
the whole thing is quite tasty. i can't wait to hear it done proper with some nice vocals. nice work!

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this is nicely set up for vocals too!!!

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i agree with everyone else's comments.

it's nicely set up for a vocal treatment, but i'm just wondering how come you haven't given it a shot? you've got everything else going for it... why not lay down some vocals - even for just demo purposes?

sorry. my curiosity.

everything musically is top notch. it's got a very catchy riff backed with a smart beat. this would be a shame to let slip away, so i hope either someone steps up whose a good match, or that perhaps you pen something down of your own pipes, even for kicks.

thanks and wonderful stuff!

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the thing is, i cant sing for my life

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heck...I may even take a stab at this one. I like the vibe. Nicely done.

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I uploaded a version with my vocals. It's called Walk Away. Not sure if it'll float your boat or if it's even close to what you had in mind, but it's my feeble attempt, fwiw. Hope ya dig it, at least a little...

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could use some vox but stands alone quite nicely

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Great job!

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love the groove and rhythm of this song... With vocals this will be greater for shure

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http://www.macjams.com/song/32689 version with vocals as done by cthayes

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