solid drums and cool pizzicato strings... This song needs an emcee and some pads to get even more solid... Good job

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yeah craft hit it on tha head .....good job love the drums : )

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because i lack the knowledge to properly critique the song, i would defer to what Craft is saying here, as well.

pizzicato hits are typically used as accents within a composition, from what i know about classical music. hearing them throughout the entire piece is an interesting approach, but it does seem to limit the emotional impactfulness overall. i think the idea of a synth pad or an unusual synth lead might lend itself nicely, especially if brought in about 1/4 of the way through.

and once again, this is set up perfectly for some vocal waxing. any plans on that? just curious!

Go randy moss!

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For all my 3 rap beats on macjams i plan to add some vocals. Right now I'm planning the structure of how the vocals will fit in.

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For all my 3 rap beats on macjams i plan to add some vocals. Right now I'm planning the structure of how the vocals will fit in.

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i like this one. the drum rolls are very nice! chords are well composed, the variation of the beat is kind of plain and simple, work on changing it up. but great work on the drums and chords!

peace

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I like the way it's put together. All it needs is some rapping over it. Good Job

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Its good,,any sing in the future??

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