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my goodbye by nevermine [Email]

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Last Played: Apr 14, 2008 - 09:58:35 AM
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Uploaded: Jun 11, 2007 - 07:26:23 PM
Last Updated: Aug 15, 2007 - 02:54:30 AM
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written about my parents who disowned me cos of my music (atleast this song gives them a reason to hate their son :) and 4 all the christians who have hurt me and left me broken and judged... just a rough rough demo with a simple drum machine but will do a produced version asap 4 the world to hear ;)

Lyrics:
i won't bleed for you, won't scream for you, i'm over you and your selfish lies,
won't need for you, won't pray for you, you put me on my knees and made me wanna die,
but i'll find a way, thru the pain, i know i won't give in i will survive,
without you beside me, without u in my life

ch

i don't need you here with me, i don't need you just to survive,
you promised forever and walked away, you walked away and fucked my life

v2
so this is goodbye to everything that i once held onto, all i knew
and i'll walk away from all of this, the emptimness and the shit u left me with,
your rules and your religion they don't seem to fit here anymore,
your jesus, your saviour, u give an inch but u take a fuken mile.

ch
i don't need you here with me, i don't need you just to survive,
you promised forever and walked away, you walked away and fucked my life


bridge

you fucked, you fucked, you fuck, you fuck..........

chorus

i don't need you here with me, i don't need you just to survive,
you promised forever and walked away, you walked away and fucked my life
i don't need you here with me, i don't need you just to survive,
you promised forever and walked away, you walked away and fucked my life

you fucked my life

but it's my goddam life.
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Good song man. &mdash 06/12/07 - 01:26:52 AM
This is obviously just a demo. You need to do more with the drums and expand on the arrangement, but I can already hear the core of a damn good song. I really like your voice, clear and powerful. I can relate to the lyrics very strongly. I'm going to send you a private message.

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thanks man &mdash 06/12/07 - 01:30:07 AM
yep just a demo but fuk i wanna get it out to the world. my life was ruined by the church and i want them to get hurt back, anyways off the topic thanks for your comment man, really inspires me!!!
geoff

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Strong lyrics &mdash 06/12/07 - 03:51:32 AM
Think you've got some strong lyrics here. Well-structured.
Look forward to hearing a "produced" version.
LL

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thanks man &mdash 06/12/07 - 05:12:27 AM
i'm lookin forward to doin it properly too. wanna stir some feathers lol!! thanks 4 ur feedback...
geoff

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