Your voice is too far off and echoey. Almost as if you want
to bust loose but are afraid to wake the head cook of
wagon train who sleeps with a heavy cast iron pan under
his pillow. The guitar playing is a little tentative at times
but generally pretty expressive and has excellent clarity.
How did you position your mic? I'm looking for tips! The
song might be a bit repetitive. Bring out those shakers!
How about a little harmonica solo in there?

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Very cool guitar groove. Spooky and hip and harmonically
interesting. It sounds like a music idea, a demo draft of
something that wold be great to flesh out and make into
something more. Very nice start.

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